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I wish I had done this with my homebrew race, the Maristo.
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Goadfang leans forward in his seat, his ale gently sloshing in it's tankard, he says "Let me tell you a tale that will make the hairs on your head stand up and ask for the check..."
A servitors life is not a pretty one; while you are graced with an adaptive respiratory system you are also burdened with a repugnant mutant face and some mental ailments most commonly encountered afflictions are: slight to major memory loss, new phobias and unusual dietary alterations. Typically a servitor lives to be around 130 this is due to the secretions acting as a stimulant for the immune system. Servitors lack their own culture as they are simply mutated humans, however there are rumours spoken in hushed tones of a of a small undersea city filled with thousand of free servitors, though no-one has been able to verify these claims.
Most servitors have poor opinions of "purer" races like humans and high elves; but it should be noted that many servitors show outright disdain towards the Triton seeing them as "pompous aquatic elves" this bigotry has lead to little communication with other races with the exception of Drow and Teiflings as most servitors feel that they can understand the pain of being hunted because you stand out. Due to this fear of being hunted owing to their malformed visages many servitors have taken to wearing full face helmets or large masks, this wariness extends to combat as well; with their bread and butter being: spears ,tridents, large harpoons and any other long stabby weapons. However if skewering the enemy is a poor choice many servitors carry small side weapons in the form of maces, sabres, clubs and even rudimentary weapons such as anchors stolen form faerie boats or vessels of similar size. specialised missile weapons jury-rigged from whaling and fishing tools are commonplace with the fearsome harpoon gun taking centre stage supported by nets or other versatile amphibious weapons. Harpoon guns used by servitors use a spring mechanism in place of the classing string of a crossbow, with the springs being made from a special rust-resistant alloy.
Servitor names
Many servitors either use their original name or find a new human name if they have forgotten their original one. however in some rare cases they use single word names that denote their title or job such as: Bosun or Rigger.
Hi i'm new here I figured I would make my first impression with a race what do you think?
https://www.dndbeyond.com/characters/races/31747-aboleth-servitor
feedback is appreciated
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"The relevant equation is: Knowledge = power = energy = matter = mass; a good bookshop is just a genteel Black Hole that knows how to read." - Terry Pratchett
You may not want to publish it yet, which I assume is why you are asking for feedback. I recommend going to the summary page for your creation and copying it, then pasting it into a post here. Then you can receive feedback before you post it.
I wish I had done this with my homebrew race, the Maristo.
Goadfang leans forward in his seat, his ale gently sloshing in it's tankard, he says "Let me tell you a tale that will make the hairs on your head stand up and ask for the check..."
I just want to know what people think about my race and if it's cool or not.
Aboleth servitor Race Details
A servitors life is not a pretty one; while you are graced with an adaptive respiratory system you are also burdened with a repugnant mutant face and some mental ailments most commonly encountered afflictions are: slight to major memory loss, new phobias and unusual dietary alterations. Typically a servitor lives to be around 130 this is due to the secretions acting as a stimulant for the immune system. Servitors lack their own culture as they are simply mutated humans, however there are rumours spoken in hushed tones of a of a small undersea city filled with thousand of free servitors, though no-one has been able to verify these claims.
Most servitors have poor opinions of "purer" races like humans and high elves; but it should be noted that many servitors show outright disdain towards the Triton seeing them as "pompous aquatic elves" this bigotry has lead to little communication with other races with the exception of Drow and Teiflings as most servitors feel that they can understand the pain of being hunted because you stand out. Due to this fear of being hunted owing to their malformed visages many servitors have taken to wearing full face helmets or large masks, this wariness extends to combat as well; with their bread and butter being: spears ,tridents, large harpoons and any other long stabby weapons. However if skewering the enemy is a poor choice many servitors carry small side weapons in the form of maces, sabres, clubs and even rudimentary weapons such as anchors stolen form faerie boats or vessels of similar size. specialised missile weapons jury-rigged from whaling and fishing tools are commonplace with the fearsome harpoon gun taking centre stage supported by nets or other versatile amphibious weapons. Harpoon guns used by servitors use a spring mechanism in place of the classing string of a crossbow, with the springs being made from a special rust-resistant alloy.
Servitor names
Many servitors either use their original name or find a new human name if they have forgotten their original one. however in some rare cases they use single word names that denote their title or job such as: Bosun or Rigger.
Aboleth servitor Traits
Amphibious and intimidating sour creatures