*Cathan will be the villain of the story I'm going to write next year. He's going to be a bit less altruistic, however, to drive in the point that he is the bad guy and not an anti-villain.*
*Cathan will be the villain of the story I'm going to write next year. He's going to be a bit less altruistic, however, to drive in the point that he is the bad guy and not an anti-villain.*
*I love Cathan, but making him more of a villain would be more fitting. Making him a more true villain would be very interesting.*
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Local Jokester, Viber, Doctor, and Therapist, I do my best to make your day better, and if I fail I'll try again tomorrow.
'Nothing is beautiful because it lasts.'
'War does not decide who was right, but only who is left.'
*Cathan will be the villain of the story I'm going to write next year. He's going to be a bit less altruistic, however, to drive in the point that he is the bad guy and not an anti-villain.*
*I love Cathan, but making him more of a villain would be more fitting. Making him a more true villain would be very interesting.*
*The only thing I really need to do is to give him a less 'heroic' intention. I talked with the closest thing I have to a co-writer, my dad, and he suggested making Cathan feel unloveable, so he built a cult around himself filled with people who are completely dependent upon him. He has everything a good villain needs, including the sheer level of amoral power he holds. On top of that, he still remains a victim of a cruel and callous system that used him up and discarded him, thinking he would never rise again.*
*Even better, I'm strongly considering making Felix my hero, and I could give Felix Cathan's sort of power set: culinary-themed alchemical enhancements. High speed, high durability, creations. They could be good foils to each other, especially since Felix provides an actual loving community and has genuine empathy while Cathan deceives people into thinking that is the case for him.*
*Cathan will be the villain of the story I'm going to write next year. He's going to be a bit less altruistic, however, to drive in the point that he is the bad guy and not an anti-villain.*
*I love Cathan, but making him more of a villain would be more fitting. Making him a more true villain would be very interesting.*
*The only thing I really need to do is to give him a less 'heroic' intention. I talked with the closest thing I have to a co-writer, my dad, and he suggested making Cathan feel unloveable, so he built a cult around himself filled with people who are completely dependent upon him. He has everything a good villain needs, including the sheer level of amoral power he holds. On top of that, he still remains a victim of a cruel and callous system that used him up and discarded him, thinking he would never rise again.*
*Even better, I'm strongly considering making Felix my hero, and I could give Felix Cathan's sort of power set: culinary-themed alchemical enhancements. High speed, high durability, creations. They could be good foils to each other, especially since Felix provides an actual loving community and has genuine empathy while Cathan deceives people into thinking that is the case for him.*
*I entirely support that, and I have no suggestions of my own unfortunately. I do want Felix to please be a hero, he's already one in the eyes of everyone who has befriended them.*
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Local Jokester, Viber, Doctor, and Therapist, I do my best to make your day better, and if I fail I'll try again tomorrow.
'Nothing is beautiful because it lasts.'
'War does not decide who was right, but only who is left.'
*The only thing I really need to do is to give him a less 'heroic' intention. I talked with the closest thing I have to a co-writer, my dad, and he suggested making Cathan feel unloveable, so he built a cult around himself filled with people who are completely dependent upon him. He has everything a good villain needs, including the sheer level of amoral power he holds. On top of that, he still remains a victim of a cruel and callous system that used him up and discarded him, thinking he would never rise again.*
*Even better, I'm strongly considering making Felix my hero, and I could give Felix Cathan's sort of power set: culinary-themed alchemical enhancements. High speed, high durability, creations. They could be good foils to each other, especially since Felix provides an actual loving community and has genuine empathy while Cathan deceives people into thinking that is the case for him.*
*I entirely support that, and I have no suggestions of my own unfortunately. I do want Felix to please be a hero, he's already one in the eyes of everyone who has befriended them.*
*I still feel like Felix isn't much of a hero, even though people like him. I always though of him as an anti-hero at best, but I've been consuming more varied media lately and Felix actually displays quite a bit of positive masculinity despite being a pint-sized femboy. He takes responsibility a good amount of the time, he cares for others, he doesn't abuse his power (as long as he isn't desperate), and he takes care or people around him without expecting anything in return.*
*He'd be a decent dad, I think. And what is a hero but a decent dad who cares for innocent civilians?*
*The only thing I really need to do is to give him a less 'heroic' intention. I talked with the closest thing I have to a co-writer, my dad, and he suggested making Cathan feel unloveable, so he built a cult around himself filled with people who are completely dependent upon him. He has everything a good villain needs, including the sheer level of amoral power he holds. On top of that, he still remains a victim of a cruel and callous system that used him up and discarded him, thinking he would never rise again.*
*Even better, I'm strongly considering making Felix my hero, and I could give Felix Cathan's sort of power set: culinary-themed alchemical enhancements. High speed, high durability, creations. They could be good foils to each other, especially since Felix provides an actual loving community and has genuine empathy while Cathan deceives people into thinking that is the case for him.*
*I entirely support that, and I have no suggestions of my own unfortunately. I do want Felix to please be a hero, he's already one in the eyes of everyone who has befriended them.*
*I still feel like Felix isn't much of a hero, even though people like him. I always though of him as an anti-hero at best, but I've been consuming more varied media lately and Felix actually displays quite a bit of positive masculinity despite being a pint-sized femboy. He takes responsibility a good amount of the time, he cares for others, he doesn't abuse his power (as long as he isn't desperate), and he takes care or people around him without expecting anything in return.*
*He'd be a decent dad, I think. And what is a hero but a decent dad who cares for innocent civilians?*
*That's exactly what I'm saying, now if only he could have a romantic life that wasn't nothing but terrible mistakes, but then again what good hero has a half decent love life? He's done nothing but be a good hero, he's shown love to nearly everyone he's met, and cared for them, I'd say he's a hero.*
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Local Jokester, Viber, Doctor, and Therapist, I do my best to make your day better, and if I fail I'll try again tomorrow.
'Nothing is beautiful because it lasts.'
'War does not decide who was right, but only who is left.'
*snip for arch* Paia stands up and tries to get her friend to follow her, but Brynn grumbles and puts her head on the table. "Fine." she huffs "If you ever get done sulking, I'll be in the ballroom dancing the night away" and she heads to the ballroom with an excited giggle
One short trip up the stairs and she finds herself in a magnificent ballroom. Carved entirely of of what seems to be a singular continuous piece of marble, it is heavily decorated with mosaics of the sea, of the Archduchess, and of the symbol of the court: a balanced scale. With a balcony of its own on the other side of the room, two staircases on either side spiraling up to it, a main sort of dance floor area and a place for a band, currently playing a cheery room. It’s so opulent, so heavily decorated, colorful, and expensive looking, it’s simply the most magnificent room to look at. She looks down and realizes something just before she sets foot in the room: there is no floor. It’s a twenty foot deep pool of water. She hadn’t realized yet because the thirty or so in the ballroom dancing are walking right on the water as if it were a solid.
*GASP!* THE ORATRICE MECHANIQUE D'NALYSE CARDINALE!* Paia takes one tentative step out onto the water's surface, holding her breath
It doesn’t seem solid at first, causing a little ripple, but as she takes a full step it bends a small bit to support her weight, and it holds firm. It’s somewhere inbetween a trampoline and an ice skating rink, but the dancers make it look flawless. Paia gets the feeling if she falls, the water tension will break and she’ll sink.
she steps back onto the sidelines and resolves to just watch the dancers. At least, until somebody comes to sweep her off her feet. *she's a hopeless romantic who reads too much and yearns for adventure and romance.*
*I can definitely make a character like that. What’d you prefer they’d be like?*
the dancers are elegant, and most of them seem professionally trained. It’s a lot like actual ballroom dancing, but they often do twirls or jumps midair, like, Y’know, ice skating. It’s very interesting. A younger one, a smaller boy, missteps and trips, falling into the water with a splash. He yelps and swims to the stairs to use them as support to pull himself back up.
*Well I'm pretty sure that in this setting, any suave young man is enough. take in mind, paia is 16*
She continues witching the whirling crowd
*alrighty, comin’ right up!*
someone behind Paia taps her on the shoulder lightly. As she turns around, she’s met with a boy around her age, 16-17, with fluffy brown hair, bright amber eyes, and a dark blue suit. He has a scar on his lip and a cheerful expression. He clears his throat and does a little bow.
”Damon Mureau, a pleasure to meet you.’ He says, chuckling a bit. “Care to dance?”
(if you wanna change anything, go ahead! I did this on the spot :>)
*oooooooo that's her type for sure* "Paia Andrash" she curtseys. "It'd be my pleasure" *the DC of the perception roll is 17 now, roll*
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he grabs her hand and leads her onto the dance floor, smiling. Based on how comfortable he is on the surface of the pool, he’s clearly done this before.
She gladly lets him lead, but it's clear she's no stranger to ballrooms or dancing in general. Her elegant white dress seems to shimmer in the water's reflected light, the large blue bow on the back swaying in time to the steps. *fun fact about paia! She's a mage, and she's created some of her own spells! Sure, they're not particularly useful, but they're her own inventions! They are: Sublimate, summon ribbon, turn garment inside out, move glass, and pee yourself(just a little bit)*
I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult) I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3 Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
*if you guess my pfp, you get a meme. It's a really good meme, too*
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I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult) I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3 Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
*if you guess my pfp, you get a meme. It's a really good meme, too*
*That art style feels like Persona, I know I'm wrong, but I feel I'm close.*
*not too close*
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I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult) I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3 Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
*if you guess my pfp, you get a meme. It's a really good meme, too*
*That art style feels like Persona, I know I'm wrong, but I feel I'm close.*
*not too close*
*Eh, close enough for me. What form of media?*
*music video. Vocaloid music video*
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I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult) I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3 Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
”my body can handle it. Yours is much more fragile, child. It’s better if I bear the pain, it’ll make it a lot more bearable to recover… “ she grabs a hold of his arm, and casts cure wounds. He heals 24, and she winces in pain, her right arm twitching violently as she loses the same amount.
He grips her wrist with impressive strength, looking at the mask calmly, though his voice is firm "I told you not to do that, so please do not. As your body can handle it, so can mine. I have been stabbed, cleaved and impaled, I will continue to live no matter what injuries I take. Leave yourself unharmed farther."
Taken aback, she pulls back her wrist with equally impressive strength. “Very well… if you wish.”
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*Good morning*
*Good morning friend, are you good?*
Local Jokester, Viber, Doctor, and Therapist, I do my best to make your day better, and if I fail I'll try again tomorrow.
'Nothing is beautiful because it lasts.'
'War does not decide who was right, but only who is left.'
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12WUcdu6YBH2USIcmf48FCnLwDh_mGHZJZYZWwLLRzhA/edit?tab=t.0 (For when I'm gone.)
"Hm? Oh, usually at 9 o'clock at night." She said, nodding.
"Of course." He purrs.
𝔾𝕖𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕠𝕡 𝕤𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕗, 𝕕𝕠𝕦𝕓𝕝𝕖 𝕣𝕠𝕔𝕜𝕤, 𝕡𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕔𝕠𝕥𝕔𝕙
𝕀'𝕧𝕖 𝕞𝕚𝕤𝕤𝕖𝕕 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕦𝕟𝕖 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕦𝕞𝕓𝕝𝕖𝕣𝕤 𝕔𝕝𝕚𝕟𝕜𝕚𝕟𝕘
𝔻𝕖𝕒𝕝 𝕞𝕖 𝕚𝕟, 𝕜𝕚𝕔𝕜 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕚𝕟 𝕦𝕡 𝕒 𝕟𝕠𝕥𝕔𝕙
𝔻𝕚𝕧𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕚𝕟 𝕢𝕦𝕚𝕔𝕜𝕤𝕒𝕟𝕕'𝕤 𝕗𝕒𝕤𝕥𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕟 𝕤𝕚𝕟𝕜𝕚𝕟𝕘
"So, are you free until then?" He asks, obviously insinuating they possibly spend some time together with nothing better to do.
He stands up cracking his neck "Whenever you like, I could then."
Local Jokester, Viber, Doctor, and Therapist, I do my best to make your day better, and if I fail I'll try again tomorrow.
'Nothing is beautiful because it lasts.'
'War does not decide who was right, but only who is left.'
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12WUcdu6YBH2USIcmf48FCnLwDh_mGHZJZYZWwLLRzhA/edit?tab=t.0 (For when I'm gone.)
*Yep, slept well and it's my day off*
*I am quite happy for you, good rest is always important.*
Local Jokester, Viber, Doctor, and Therapist, I do my best to make your day better, and if I fail I'll try again tomorrow.
'Nothing is beautiful because it lasts.'
'War does not decide who was right, but only who is left.'
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12WUcdu6YBH2USIcmf48FCnLwDh_mGHZJZYZWwLLRzhA/edit?tab=t.0 (For when I'm gone.)
*Cathan will be the villain of the story I'm going to write next year. He's going to be a bit less altruistic, however, to drive in the point that he is the bad guy and not an anti-villain.*
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
Awake, impure, divine
Breathgiver of the Strugels
*I love Cathan, but making him more of a villain would be more fitting. Making him a more true villain would be very interesting.*
Local Jokester, Viber, Doctor, and Therapist, I do my best to make your day better, and if I fail I'll try again tomorrow.
'Nothing is beautiful because it lasts.'
'War does not decide who was right, but only who is left.'
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12WUcdu6YBH2USIcmf48FCnLwDh_mGHZJZYZWwLLRzhA/edit?tab=t.0 (For when I'm gone.)
*The only thing I really need to do is to give him a less 'heroic' intention. I talked with the closest thing I have to a co-writer, my dad, and he suggested making Cathan feel unloveable, so he built a cult around himself filled with people who are completely dependent upon him. He has everything a good villain needs, including the sheer level of amoral power he holds. On top of that, he still remains a victim of a cruel and callous system that used him up and discarded him, thinking he would never rise again.*
*Even better, I'm strongly considering making Felix my hero, and I could give Felix Cathan's sort of power set: culinary-themed alchemical enhancements. High speed, high durability, creations. They could be good foils to each other, especially since Felix provides an actual loving community and has genuine empathy while Cathan deceives people into thinking that is the case for him.*
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
Awake, impure, divine
Breathgiver of the Strugels
*I entirely support that, and I have no suggestions of my own unfortunately. I do want Felix to please be a hero, he's already one in the eyes of everyone who has befriended them.*
Local Jokester, Viber, Doctor, and Therapist, I do my best to make your day better, and if I fail I'll try again tomorrow.
'Nothing is beautiful because it lasts.'
'War does not decide who was right, but only who is left.'
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12WUcdu6YBH2USIcmf48FCnLwDh_mGHZJZYZWwLLRzhA/edit?tab=t.0 (For when I'm gone.)
*I still feel like Felix isn't much of a hero, even though people like him. I always though of him as an anti-hero at best, but I've been consuming more varied media lately and Felix actually displays quite a bit of positive masculinity despite being a pint-sized femboy. He takes responsibility a good amount of the time, he cares for others, he doesn't abuse his power (as long as he isn't desperate), and he takes care or people around him without expecting anything in return.*
*He'd be a decent dad, I think. And what is a hero but a decent dad who cares for innocent civilians?*
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
Awake, impure, divine
Breathgiver of the Strugels
*That's exactly what I'm saying, now if only he could have a romantic life that wasn't nothing but terrible mistakes, but then again what good hero has a half decent love life? He's done nothing but be a good hero, he's shown love to nearly everyone he's met, and cared for them, I'd say he's a hero.*
Local Jokester, Viber, Doctor, and Therapist, I do my best to make your day better, and if I fail I'll try again tomorrow.
'Nothing is beautiful because it lasts.'
'War does not decide who was right, but only who is left.'
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12WUcdu6YBH2USIcmf48FCnLwDh_mGHZJZYZWwLLRzhA/edit?tab=t.0 (For when I'm gone.)
(good afternoon)
Hämärä häkellyttävä, menneisyyden menettävä
Tulevaisuus tuntematta, korkealle kurkottava
Kahleet kultaiset kukistin, raudat ruostuneet ripustin
Yksinäisen yön ylitin, sieltä itsenikin löysin
She gladly lets him lead, but it's clear she's no stranger to ballrooms or dancing in general. Her elegant white dress seems to shimmer in the water's reflected light, the large blue bow on the back swaying in time to the steps.
*fun fact about paia! She's a mage, and she's created some of her own spells! Sure, they're not particularly useful, but they're her own inventions! They are: Sublimate, summon ribbon, turn garment inside out, move glass, and pee yourself(just a little bit)*
I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs
Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult)
I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3
Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
*if you guess my pfp, you get a meme. It's a really good meme, too*
I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs
Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult)
I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3
Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
*That art style feels like Persona, I know I'm wrong, but I feel I'm close.*
Local Jokester, Viber, Doctor, and Therapist, I do my best to make your day better, and if I fail I'll try again tomorrow.
'Nothing is beautiful because it lasts.'
'War does not decide who was right, but only who is left.'
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12WUcdu6YBH2USIcmf48FCnLwDh_mGHZJZYZWwLLRzhA/edit?tab=t.0 (For when I'm gone.)
*not too close*
I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs
Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult)
I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3
Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
*Eh, close enough for me. What form of media?*
Local Jokester, Viber, Doctor, and Therapist, I do my best to make your day better, and if I fail I'll try again tomorrow.
'Nothing is beautiful because it lasts.'
'War does not decide who was right, but only who is left.'
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12WUcdu6YBH2USIcmf48FCnLwDh_mGHZJZYZWwLLRzhA/edit?tab=t.0 (For when I'm gone.)
*music video. Vocaloid music video*
I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs
Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult)
I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3
Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
Taken aback, she pulls back her wrist with equally impressive strength. “Very well… if you wish.”