*Demon Slayer isn’t poorly written, its pacing is just rushed. Other than that is has everything else. Good characters, good villains, charismatic and interesting everything. Maybe it’s just me, but I like it personally.*
*I love how you can enjoy it more than I can, and I want you to enjoy it as much as possible even when I personally don't.*
*I'm allowed to dislike it, even if I wish I didn't. I also think it's really cool, just... not as well-written as I would like. Like, why doesn't everyone use Wisteria Poison on everything? What is the difference between Breathing Styles other than aesthetics? Why do they just assume that every demon is a lost cause when they have proof that isn't the case? How on earth did Zenitsu come up with an entire Seventh Form by himself when he was too inept to even learn the other six, and why did he only use it in the last battle? And why is he such a little BI-*
*These questions don't have to be answered objectively. They really, really don't. I just don't like them. It feels sloppy to me, and while I don't expect it to be perfect... I just don't think it deserves the spot it has on the top of the metaphorical leaderboard when other people are putting in just as much work with their own creations and getting nowhere.*
*Sorry, I went on a tangent there. I don't want to fight. Demon Slayer is very cool, I just don't like the author's writing style.*
*Nah bro it’s good, the only reason I enjoy it where you don’t is because my brain kinda logs off when watching a show. I kinda ignore the stuff that doesn’t make sense because if I focused on all that I wouldn’t have any fun. Also, unrelated but Tengen is best demonslayer and no one can tell me otherwise.*
*Loudboi*
*Flashyboi.*
*Flam-BOI-ant*
*Also, what did you think of the lore? I came up with it on the spot, and I don't think I explained it very well.*
*Dude I’ll your lore is amazing. There is nothing more I can say. I really wish I could do half as good.*
I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult) I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3 Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
“Sorry, sorry… just a bit on the nose, wouldn’t you say?”
It takes the fish in its mouth, cautiously chewing it. Its translucent body shows the pieces of fish turning to pure aqueous light as it swallows and merging with its strange body.
“Okay… but I still think it’d help. Couldn’t hurt, at least.”
“Incredibly. My only complaint honestly, although it does surprisingly well with the ladies and any bards that want to tell my story.” He chuckles.
Gon walks over and sits at the edge of the water, looking at them silently, a smile on his face.
“It probably won’t hurt. Thanks Mauric, you’re a real hero.” He pats his back, smiling at the cake.
“Wow, you’re vain. If I had the time or the investment, it’d be so fun to corrupt you.”
The being looks back up. Thank you for returning the gift of the river.”
“Hero? I’m just trying to be a good friend.”
He chuckles “You think you could corrupt me? I’d argue but you don’t have the time to waste being wrong.” He drinks down another mug.
Gon nods furiously “I was going to eat that for lunch, but it seems you needed it more than me.”
“You are a good friend, you don’t have to try, you’ve done it.”
“Don’t be silly. The nature of every living thing is toward selfish, hedonistic, survivalistic indulgences. Any sense of devotion or morality fades away in the face of desires and their fulfillment. But… desires are never fulfilled… nor quenched.” He smiles nastily. “And you are left with ever-thirsting beings that have embraced their true nature, and can never rejoin the rest of deluded ‘society’.”
It was very much welcome, as I have traveled along the waters for many days to reach this place.
“Thanks.”
He looks him in the eyes “Quit with the tangent if you would. I wouldn’t have listened if I was forced to.” He crunches on another bone “Humans are flawed and terrible beings, that we know, as one myself I’ve massacred many of my brothers for less than necessary reasons. We are scum, but that doesn’t make us all easy to corrupt.”
“That’s cool, it took me a while just to get here too. Although I had a boat when I tried to get here.”
“It’s nothing man.” He pats their back and stumbles away, falling unconscious not soon after.
“Ease? Ease is meaningless to the demon, for he is eternal. Cannot any mountain be worn away, and cannot any beast be slain?”
Indeed…
Mauric sighs and helps to lift Damian, taking him to his room.
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No news is good news…
I'll lay a white rose on the cold earth, knowing it that it has not claimed your soul.
“Sorry, sorry… just a bit on the nose, wouldn’t you say?”
It takes the fish in its mouth, cautiously chewing it. Its translucent body shows the pieces of fish turning to pure aqueous light as it swallows and merging with its strange body.
“Okay… but I still think it’d help. Couldn’t hurt, at least.”
“Incredibly. My only complaint honestly, although it does surprisingly well with the ladies and any bards that want to tell my story.” He chuckles.
Gon walks over and sits at the edge of the water, looking at them silently, a smile on his face.
“It probably won’t hurt. Thanks Mauric, you’re a real hero.” He pats his back, smiling at the cake.
“Wow, you’re vain. If I had the time or the investment, it’d be so fun to corrupt you.”
The being looks back up. Thank you for returning the gift of the river.”
“Hero? I’m just trying to be a good friend.”
He chuckles “You think you could corrupt me? I’d argue but you don’t have the time to waste being wrong.” He drinks down another mug.
Gon nods furiously “I was going to eat that for lunch, but it seems you needed it more than me.”
“You are a good friend, you don’t have to try, you’ve done it.”
“Don’t be silly. The nature of every living thing is toward selfish, hedonistic, survivalistic indulgences. Any sense of devotion or morality fades away in the face of desires and their fulfillment. But… desires are never fulfilled… nor quenched.” He smiles nastily. “And you are left with ever-thirsting beings that have embraced their true nature, and can never rejoin the rest of deluded ‘society’.”
It was very much welcome, as I have traveled along the waters for many days to reach this place.
“Thanks.”
He looks him in the eyes “Quit with the tangent if you would. I wouldn’t have listened if I was forced to.” He crunches on another bone “Humans are flawed and terrible beings, that we know, as one myself I’ve massacred many of my brothers for less than necessary reasons. We are scum, but that doesn’t make us all easy to corrupt.”
“That’s cool, it took me a while just to get here too. Although I had a boat when I tried to get here.”
“It’s nothing man.” He pats their back and stumbles away, falling unconscious not soon after.
“Ease? Ease is meaningless to the demon, for he is eternal. Cannot any mountain be worn away, and cannot any beast be slain?”
Indeed…
Mauric sighs and helps to lift Damian, taking him to his room.
“Any demon can be slain as well as any mortal. Some have greater wills than mountains strong. Do not think you are mightier than man with time alone.”
Cerberus has cracked out his old Dragonchess board and is playing against a winter Eladrin with multiple fairies screaming horrible advice at him.
Sylvan is teaching a young satyr how to ethically farm Eladrin roots.
Ternikus is cutting down Creaking who walk too close to the tavern begrudgingly.
However, somehow a Creaking has found its way into the cellar.
Thirteen watches the game with mild interest.
Mauric enters the cellar with his glaive, sighing. “They don’t pay me enough for this.”
Cerberus moves a sylph from the top to middle part of the board to capture a unicorn, to which the Fairies yell, "He can take it! You idiot!" The Eladrin however does not. "If I do, My dragon is vulnerable."
The second it realizes you are watching, it freezes and close its 3 eyes, appearing as a simple statue.
“Well, if you hadn’t taken the pawn he left dangling five moves ago, you would have never been in this mess to begin with.” He comments.
“Okay buddy. Just leave and we won’t have any trouble at all.” He says, poking the statue with his glaive.
Cerberus looks away from the board and smiles at thirteen, before moving his basilisk which allows the Eladrin to move his mage to catch the Sylph. "That was not the best move buddy. And you have no right to be judging me. This man has no tell. How was I supposed to know he had a plan for it. He was building a Vecna's fort play. That pawn would have been useless."
The moment the glaive makes contact, particles of magic fly off and through the open window, all the way to the decaying forest. Soon enough, they return, and the Creaking opens its eyes and swings at Mauric.
“I was just making a minor observation to myself. I apologize.”
”Whoa!” Mauric ducks and scampers up the staircase.
Cerberus moves his Hero to capture the Eladrin's mage, leaving them aghast. He then cast some sort of spell and a sound somewhat like a voice booms that everyone can hear. "IT is FIne. YOu SAW mY trick. I AM IMPREssed! Also sor... ee that THIS SPEEch is Bro... En. THIS is a NEW TRick. I HA... no toongue."
It chases him, but right as it's about to go through the passage and attack again, it freezes again, standing directly in the doorway.
Thirteen merely continues watching, not wanting to cause aggravation.
“Huh.” Mauric shoves it back down the stairs, attempting to damage it in the process. Strength: 11
The Eldarin realizes what's about to happen and tries to move their king, but Cerberus points out they can't move there as their Elemental can take that space. Defeated, they moved their second unicorn to capture a warrior. Cerberus then makes his final move, moving his Griffin and checkmating them.
opposing strength 21 (If fail, it crashes down and cracks in half, still alive though. If success, it does nothing and looks perfectly into your pupils.)
I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult) I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3 Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
Anyone wanna join in my pm rp thing? I lost the big shiny cool advert but I have a harpy king who just loves helping people. He also has a palace
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I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult) I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3 Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
*Demon Slayer isn’t poorly written, its pacing is just rushed. Other than that is has everything else. Good characters, good villains, charismatic and interesting everything. Maybe it’s just me, but I like it personally.*
*I love how you can enjoy it more than I can, and I want you to enjoy it as much as possible even when I personally don't.*
*I'm allowed to dislike it, even if I wish I didn't. I also think it's really cool, just... not as well-written as I would like. Like, why doesn't everyone use Wisteria Poison on everything? What is the difference between Breathing Styles other than aesthetics? Why do they just assume that every demon is a lost cause when they have proof that isn't the case? How on earth did Zenitsu come up with an entire Seventh Form by himself when he was too inept to even learn the other six, and why did he only use it in the last battle? And why is he such a little BI-*
*These questions don't have to be answered objectively. They really, really don't. I just don't like them. It feels sloppy to me, and while I don't expect it to be perfect... I just don't think it deserves the spot it has on the top of the metaphorical leaderboard when other people are putting in just as much work with their own creations and getting nowhere.*
*Sorry, I went on a tangent there. I don't want to fight. Demon Slayer is very cool, I just don't like the author's writing style.*
*Dude I’ll your lore is amazing. There is nothing more I can say. I really wish I could do half as good.*
"Can you blame me for caution?"
I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs
Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult)
I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3
Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
*G A S P- OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOD THEAE ARE SO GOOOOOOD!!!!! :D
𝔾𝕖𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕠𝕡 𝕤𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕗, 𝕕𝕠𝕦𝕓𝕝𝕖 𝕣𝕠𝕔𝕜𝕤, 𝕡𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕔𝕠𝕥𝕔𝕙
𝕀'𝕧𝕖 𝕞𝕚𝕤𝕤𝕖𝕕 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕦𝕟𝕖 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕦𝕞𝕓𝕝𝕖𝕣𝕤 𝕔𝕝𝕚𝕟𝕜𝕚𝕟𝕘
𝔻𝕖𝕒𝕝 𝕞𝕖 𝕚𝕟, 𝕜𝕚𝕔𝕜 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕚𝕟 𝕦𝕡 𝕒 𝕟𝕠𝕥𝕔𝕙
𝔻𝕚𝕧𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕚𝕟 𝕢𝕦𝕚𝕔𝕜𝕤𝕒𝕟𝕕'𝕤 𝕗𝕒𝕤𝕥𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕟 𝕤𝕚𝕟𝕜𝕚𝕟𝕘
*Oh yes truly.*
𝔾𝕖𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕠𝕡 𝕤𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕗, 𝕕𝕠𝕦𝕓𝕝𝕖 𝕣𝕠𝕔𝕜𝕤, 𝕡𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕔𝕠𝕥𝕔𝕙
𝕀'𝕧𝕖 𝕞𝕚𝕤𝕤𝕖𝕕 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕦𝕟𝕖 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕦𝕞𝕓𝕝𝕖𝕣𝕤 𝕔𝕝𝕚𝕟𝕜𝕚𝕟𝕘
𝔻𝕖𝕒𝕝 𝕞𝕖 𝕚𝕟, 𝕜𝕚𝕔𝕜 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕚𝕟 𝕦𝕡 𝕒 𝕟𝕠𝕥𝕔𝕙
𝔻𝕚𝕧𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕚𝕟 𝕢𝕦𝕚𝕔𝕜𝕤𝕒𝕟𝕕'𝕤 𝕗𝕒𝕤𝕥𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕟 𝕤𝕚𝕟𝕜𝕚𝕟𝕘
“Ease? Ease is meaningless to the demon, for he is eternal. Cannot any mountain be worn away, and cannot any beast be slain?”
Indeed…
Mauric sighs and helps to lift Damian, taking him to his room.
No news is good news…
I'll lay a white rose on the cold earth, knowing it that it has not claimed your soul.
“Any demon can be slain as well as any mortal. Some have greater wills than mountains strong. Do not think you are mightier than man with time alone.”
“I’m Gon, what’s your name?”
The Writer is asleep for now, Scott back in control. He is curled up in bed, refusing to get out of it.
Honeywhisker is painting, trying to capture the sunset.
The Fey King is watching his followers eat their meals, humming to himself.
Luciano is sipping his evening tea, reading over old scriptures.
Yuri is with Donn, having dinner.
𝔾𝕖𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕠𝕡 𝕤𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕗, 𝕕𝕠𝕦𝕓𝕝𝕖 𝕣𝕠𝕔𝕜𝕤, 𝕡𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕔𝕠𝕥𝕔𝕙
𝕀'𝕧𝕖 𝕞𝕚𝕤𝕤𝕖𝕕 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕦𝕟𝕖 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕦𝕞𝕓𝕝𝕖𝕣𝕤 𝕔𝕝𝕚𝕟𝕜𝕚𝕟𝕘
𝔻𝕖𝕒𝕝 𝕞𝕖 𝕚𝕟, 𝕜𝕚𝕔𝕜 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕚𝕟 𝕦𝕡 𝕒 𝕟𝕠𝕥𝕔𝕙
𝔻𝕚𝕧𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕚𝕟 𝕢𝕦𝕚𝕔𝕜𝕤𝕒𝕟𝕕'𝕤 𝕗𝕒𝕤𝕥𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕟 𝕤𝕚𝕟𝕜𝕚𝕟𝕘
*does so not passive aggressive*
Hi, I’m DrakenBrine, here’s my Sig and characters
I am The Grand Envisioner!
*Did you see the leaks?*
No news is good news…
I'll lay a white rose on the cold earth, knowing it that it has not claimed your soul.
It's spooky season
I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs
Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult)
I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3
Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
*Not yet but I've heard tale of it.*
𝔾𝕖𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕠𝕡 𝕤𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕗, 𝕕𝕠𝕦𝕓𝕝𝕖 𝕣𝕠𝕔𝕜𝕤, 𝕡𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕔𝕠𝕥𝕔𝕙
𝕀'𝕧𝕖 𝕞𝕚𝕤𝕤𝕖𝕕 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕦𝕟𝕖 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕦𝕞𝕓𝕝𝕖𝕣𝕤 𝕔𝕝𝕚𝕟𝕜𝕚𝕟𝕘
𝔻𝕖𝕒𝕝 𝕞𝕖 𝕚𝕟, 𝕜𝕚𝕔𝕜 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕚𝕟 𝕦𝕡 𝕒 𝕟𝕠𝕥𝕔𝕙
𝔻𝕚𝕧𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕚𝕟 𝕢𝕦𝕚𝕔𝕜𝕤𝕒𝕟𝕕'𝕤 𝕗𝕒𝕤𝕥𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕟 𝕤𝕚𝕟𝕜𝕚𝕟𝕘
Divine Pup Fenrir walks up to the Fey King, sniffing the air.
Hi, I’m DrakenBrine, here’s my Sig and characters
I am The Grand Envisioner!
The Writer is asleep for now, Scott back in control. He is curled up in bed, refusing to get out of it.
Honeywhisker is painting, trying to capture the sunset.
The Fey King is watching his followers eat their meals, humming to himself.
Dani is wandering around in a drug induced haze.
Luciano is sipping his evening tea, reading over old scriptures.
Allison is playing her lute in the tavern library.
Yuri is with Donn, having dinner.
𝔾𝕖𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕠𝕡 𝕤𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕗, 𝕕𝕠𝕦𝕓𝕝𝕖 𝕣𝕠𝕔𝕜𝕤, 𝕡𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕔𝕠𝕥𝕔𝕙
𝕀'𝕧𝕖 𝕞𝕚𝕤𝕤𝕖𝕕 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕦𝕟𝕖 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕦𝕞𝕓𝕝𝕖𝕣𝕤 𝕔𝕝𝕚𝕟𝕜𝕚𝕟𝕘
𝔻𝕖𝕒𝕝 𝕞𝕖 𝕚𝕟, 𝕜𝕚𝕔𝕜 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕚𝕟 𝕦𝕡 𝕒 𝕟𝕠𝕥𝕔𝕙
𝔻𝕚𝕧𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕚𝕟 𝕢𝕦𝕚𝕔𝕜𝕤𝕒𝕟𝕕'𝕤 𝕗𝕒𝕤𝕥𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕟 𝕤𝕚𝕟𝕜𝕚𝕟𝕘
It turns, it's crescent head tilting to the side "Hello little one..."
𝔾𝕖𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕠𝕡 𝕤𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕗, 𝕕𝕠𝕦𝕓𝕝𝕖 𝕣𝕠𝕔𝕜𝕤, 𝕡𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕔𝕠𝕥𝕔𝕙
𝕀'𝕧𝕖 𝕞𝕚𝕤𝕤𝕖𝕕 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕦𝕟𝕖 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕦𝕞𝕓𝕝𝕖𝕣𝕤 𝕔𝕝𝕚𝕟𝕜𝕚𝕟𝕘
𝔻𝕖𝕒𝕝 𝕞𝕖 𝕚𝕟, 𝕜𝕚𝕔𝕜 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕚𝕟 𝕦𝕡 𝕒 𝕟𝕠𝕥𝕔𝕙
𝔻𝕚𝕧𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕚𝕟 𝕢𝕦𝕚𝕔𝕜𝕤𝕒𝕟𝕕'𝕤 𝕗𝕒𝕤𝕥𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕟 𝕤𝕚𝕟𝕜𝕚𝕟𝕘
Anyone wanna join in my pm rp thing? I lost the big shiny cool advert but I have a harpy king who just loves helping people. He also has a palace
I'm Fry, a doodler, writer, aspiring singer/songwriter, and sort-of youtuber (check me out!) goofin' around on the interwebs
Soli Deo Gloria(Sed servus eius crustulum vult)
I'm a disabled, neurodivergent, dumpster fire, and somewhat of a clown, but I do my best :3
Crafter of Constellations, vocaloid enjoyer, waluigi’s #1 fan, space alien, undead cutie pie, danganer of ronpas, and certified silly goose
Internet big sib to aspeninthetrees, TheGatoLover, (and hopefully more)
*AHHHHHHH, POKEMON*
*cut*
“Wow, didn’t mean to make the conversation all poetic. And you make a fine point. All I’m saying is, there’s no such thing as an indomitable spirit.”
Words of men depict me as Suhou.
No news is good news…
I'll lay a white rose on the cold earth, knowing it that it has not claimed your soul.
*I can kinda answer some of those if you want?*
*Also hi, how is everyone doing?*
*dawg this is spectacular*
No news is good news…
I'll lay a white rose on the cold earth, knowing it that it has not claimed your soul.