I read through all of what you posted and think it was incredible 10/10. I thought it started off really good and persisted really well through the second act. You could tell there was a lot of character development and I personally think iwe's story arc was expertly written. One of the most amazing literary works I have ever read.
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I read through all of what you posted and think it was incredible 10/10. I thought it started off really good and persisted really well through the second act. You could tell there was a lot of character development and I personally think iwe's story arc was expertly written. One of the most amazing literary works I have ever read.
Yes, it was incredible, Vitus. I really think wei shouldn't have done all those things in act three, but other than that, it was fantastic.
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Thanks for the literary review of my earlier post. It was the summation of three years of hard work and rewrites. Really put my heart and soul into it.
Out of curiosity: What's a story (whether it's from book, play, movie, etc.) you found interesting but would want to see another version of where some of the premise is changed.
For example on my mind right now is: What if you took The Matrix and the basic premise of mankind living in a virtual world with their bodies plugged into it, but changed it so that instead of being put into the matrix by robots, mankind itself had decided to enter a virtual world. Could be interesting to see the philosophical questions for and against such a course of action and the tension between those that went into the virtual world and those that didn't and if there's conflicts between those societies.
Thanks for the literary review of my earlier post. It was the summation of three years of hard work and rewrites. Really put my heart and soul into it.
Wow, that's dedication.
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Out of curiosity: What's a story (whether it's from book, play, movie, etc.) you found interesting but would want to see another version of where some of the premise is changed.
For example on my mind right now is: What if you took The Matrix and the basic premise of mankind living in a virtual world with their bodies plugged into it, but changed it so that instead of being put into the matrix by robots, mankind itself had decided to enter a virtual world. Could be interesting to see the philosophical questions for and against such a course of action and the tension between those that went into the virtual world and those that didn't and if there's conflicts between those societies.
That would be pretty fun to watch, actually.
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...and started me on my way into my next chapter in life...
Out of curiosity: What's a story (whether it's from book, play, movie, etc.) you found interesting but would want to see another version of where some of the premise is changed.
For example on my mind right now is: What if you took The Matrix and the basic premise of mankind living in a virtual world with their bodies plugged into it, but changed it so that instead of being put into the matrix by robots, mankind itself had decided to enter a virtual world. Could be interesting to see the philosophical questions for and against such a course of action and the tension between those that went into the virtual world and those that didn't and if there's conflicts between those societies.
That would be pretty fun to watch, actually.
If I could set my mind to actually writing a story, it'd certainly be interesting to think more in-depth on.
Out of curiosity: What's a story (whether it's from book, play, movie, etc.) you found interesting but would want to see another version of where some of the premise is changed.
For example on my mind right now is: What if you took The Matrix and the basic premise of mankind living in a virtual world with their bodies plugged into it, but changed it so that instead of being put into the matrix by robots, mankind itself had decided to enter a virtual world. Could be interesting to see the philosophical questions for and against such a course of action and the tension between those that went into the virtual world and those that didn't and if there's conflicts between those societies.
That would be pretty fun to watch, actually.
If I could set my mind to actually writing a story, it'd certainly be interesting to think more in-depth on.
Yeah
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I read through all of what you posted and think it was incredible 10/10. I thought it started off really good and persisted really well through the second act. You could tell there was a lot of character development and I personally think iwe's story arc was expertly written. One of the most amazing literary works I have ever read.
Quokkas are objectively the best animal, anyone who disagrees needs a psychiatric evaluation
Yes, it was incredible, Vitus. I really think wei shouldn't have done all those things in act three, but other than that, it was fantastic.
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Yeah I thought it was better than Shakespeare's writing
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Better than Homer. Not Homer Simpson, just Homer.
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Sounds about right
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Thanks for the literary review of my earlier post. It was the summation of three years of hard work and rewrites. Really put my heart and soul into it.
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I made more furry art
if anyone wamts me to make them art id be glad to
Could you make a tabaxi rouge? Just curious.
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i shall do my best, any specific colors?
Out of curiosity: What's a story (whether it's from book, play, movie, etc.) you found interesting but would want to see another version of where some of the premise is changed.
For example on my mind right now is: What if you took The Matrix and the basic premise of mankind living in a virtual world with their bodies plugged into it, but changed it so that instead of being put into the matrix by robots, mankind itself had decided to enter a virtual world.
Could be interesting to see the philosophical questions for and against such a course of action and the tension between those that went into the virtual world and those that didn't and if there's conflicts between those societies.
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Wow, that's dedication.
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Yellow, and thanks!
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That would be pretty fun to watch, actually.
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here ya go
Wow, thanks that looks really awesome.
How long did it take you to make it? Or was it from an existing template and you just added colours?
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If I could set my mind to actually writing a story, it'd certainly be interesting to think more in-depth on.
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i used an ai
Yeah
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