What started out originally as two Sorcerer subclasses has now exploded into this full on class which I was going to keep for myself but instead decided "Eh screw that" so after about 8 months of rewriting things and transferring it all to D&DB from over 20 pages of notes it is finally done. *sigh of satisfaction*
Again stop spamming the forum by reposting something you already posted not long ago. Especially since you aren't even looking for a discussion / feedback, you're just advertising.
Again stop spamming the forum by reposting something you already posted not long ago. Especially since you aren't even looking for a discussion / feedback, you're just advertising.
It's not spam if the other thread got taken down and it's not the same post D&DB rejected my old one and I had to change the name of my class as well as change every mention of Mystic to the new name Evoker to avoid copyright issues
Why is it a class? It just seems like a vaguely different Sorcerer. The number of subclasses is pretty impressive, but I don't see why you didn't simply make them as subclasses for Sorcerer.
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Look at what you've done. You spoiled it. You have nobody to blame but yourself. Go sit and think about your actions.
Don't be mean. Rudeness is a vicious cycle, and it has to stop somewhere. Exceptions for things that are funny. Go to the current Competition of the Finest 'Brews! It's a cool place where cool people make cool things.
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Why is it a class? It just seems like a vaguely different Sorcerer. The number of subclasses is pretty impressive, but I don't see why you didn't simply make them as subclasses for Sorcerer.
TBH I was lazy and didn't want to retype every subclass so that it would fit as a Sorcerer since I spent over 8 months rewriting all the stats then typing it all into D&DB only to find out that I can't upload it for two reasons.
1. The features of the subclass don't match the Sorcerer
2. During the whole editing process of this class, D&DB gave me errors stating that the class was to similar to the Druid and originally the class was called The Mystic but D&DB took it down because it had the same name as a class that Wizards had created for UA but never released so I then had to change the name to Evoker and change every mention of Mystic to Evoker which was very annoying.
Firstly, this is a Sorcerer with identity crisis, a few extra metamagic options and then a whole bunch of subclasses ripping off existing subclasses with a few tweaks. It's 10% original, 90% tweaked variation of already existing fare hamfisted together, and with zero semblance of individuality. I get every homebrewer may do this in some ways, but this is pure extreme "copy paste tweak". The parts that aren't this, the few scraps of stuff that are original, are vastly OP or complicated.
This is an overcomplicated mess of OP and cobbled-copypastes.
The time and mimic ones, focus on those as their own individual identities - be they whole unique classes or a subclass of Sorcerer and nerf them, like a lot. Then you'll truly have something. The rest is just a mishmash of unmashables that only gives a 'please no, don't!" vibe.
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From Rule 3
It is not permitted to “bump” threads for the sake of increasing post visibility, raising thread priority, or alerting subscribed members of a thread. Threads may be replied to if they contain a significant update or contribution to the discussion.
and from rule 12.
All homebrew must match the creation type.
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Firstly, this is a Sorcerer with identity crisis, a few extra metamagic options and then a whole bunch of subclasses ripping off existing subclasses with a few tweaks. It's 10% original, 90% tweaked variation of already existing fare hamfisted together, and with zero semblance of individuality. I get every homebrewer may do this in some ways, but this is pure extreme "copy paste tweak". The parts that aren't this, the few scraps of stuff that are original, are vastly OP or complicated.
This is an overcomplicated mess of OP and cobbled-copypastes.
The time and mimic ones, focus on those as their own individual identities - be they whole unique classes or a subclass of Sorcerer and nerf them, like a lot. Then you'll truly have something. The rest is just a mishmash of unmashables that only gives a 'please no, don't!" vibe.
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Also going to add some nuggets from Site Rules you should know about:
From Rule 3
It is not permitted to “bump” threads for the sake of increasing post visibility, raising thread priority, or alerting subscribed members of a thread. Threads may be replied to if they contain a significant update or contribution to the discussion.
and from rule 12.
All homebrew must match the creation type. (DruidVSAdventure) How can my class match if D&DB doesn't have a place to put HB classes and making it a Subclass for Sorcerer told me it was to similar to the Druid class, thus not allowing an upload so how do I fix this then?
(DruidVSAdventure) Keep in mind that this project originally started as two HB Sorcerer subclasses one being just a new Wild Magic Surge table and the other the Time based subclass which then lead to creating new subclasses then the whole class itself. The reason for using various sources from various class and subclass features was to create a buffed version of the Sorcerer while granting great subclass options Example: The Mark of the Open Mind is heavily inspired by the Psi-based Rogue and Fighter subclasses which I figured would be cool to have a spellcaster with similar features.
All homebrew must match the creation type. (DruidVSAdventure) How can my class match if D&DB doesn't have a place to put HB classes and making it a Subclass for Sorcerer told me it was to similar to the Druid class, thus not allowing an upload so how do I fix this then?
Simple. Don't publish it on D&D Beyond. D&D Beyond doesn't have the infrastructure to allow homebrewing a whole class, and you're not supposed to try to work around that.
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Look at what you've done. You spoiled it. You have nobody to blame but yourself. Go sit and think about your actions.
Don't be mean. Rudeness is a vicious cycle, and it has to stop somewhere. Exceptions for things that are funny. Go to the current Competition of the Finest 'Brews! It's a cool place where cool people make cool things.
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Title speaks for itself.
What started out originally as two Sorcerer subclasses has now exploded into this full on class which I was going to keep for myself but instead decided "Eh screw that" so after about 8 months of rewriting things and transferring it all to D&DB from over 20 pages of notes it is finally done. *sigh of satisfaction*
The Evoker (Homebrew Class) Race for Dungeons & Dragons (D&D) Fifth Edition (5e) - D&D Beyond (dndbeyond.com)
It's also in the homebrew races section (HB classes wouldn't let me upload it) just put in my name
DruidVSAdventure
Thx for checking out.
DruidVSAdventure
Check out my Homebrew Class The Evoker
Again stop spamming the forum by reposting something you already posted not long ago. Especially since you aren't even looking for a discussion / feedback, you're just advertising.
It's not spam if the other thread got taken down and it's not the same post D&DB rejected my old one and I had to change the name of my class as well as change every mention of Mystic to the new name Evoker to avoid copyright issues
DruidVSAdventure
Check out my Homebrew Class The Evoker
Why is it a class? It just seems like a vaguely different Sorcerer. The number of subclasses is pretty impressive, but I don't see why you didn't simply make them as subclasses for Sorcerer.
Look at what you've done. You spoiled it. You have nobody to blame but yourself. Go sit and think about your actions.
Don't be mean. Rudeness is a vicious cycle, and it has to stop somewhere. Exceptions for things that are funny.
Go to the current Competition of the Finest 'Brews! It's a cool place where cool people make cool things.
How I'm posting based on text formatting: Mod Hat Off - Mod Hat Also Off (I'm not a mod)
TBH I was lazy and didn't want to retype every subclass so that it would fit as a Sorcerer since I spent over 8 months rewriting all the stats then typing it all into D&DB only to find out that I can't upload it for two reasons.
1. The features of the subclass don't match the Sorcerer
2. During the whole editing process of this class, D&DB gave me errors stating that the class was to similar to the Druid and originally the class was called The Mystic but D&DB took it down because it had the same name as a class that Wizards had created for UA but never released so I then had to change the name to Evoker and change every mention of Mystic to Evoker which was very annoying.
DruidVSAdventure
Check out my Homebrew Class The Evoker
Firstly, this is a Sorcerer with identity crisis, a few extra metamagic options and then a whole bunch of subclasses ripping off existing subclasses with a few tweaks. It's 10% original, 90% tweaked variation of already existing fare hamfisted together, and with zero semblance of individuality. I get every homebrewer may do this in some ways, but this is pure extreme "copy paste tweak". The parts that aren't this, the few scraps of stuff that are original, are vastly OP or complicated.
This is an overcomplicated mess of OP and cobbled-copypastes.
The time and mimic ones, focus on those as their own individual identities - be they whole unique classes or a subclass of Sorcerer and nerf them, like a lot. Then you'll truly have something. The rest is just a mishmash of unmashables that only gives a 'please no, don't!" vibe.
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Also going to add some nuggets from Site Rules you should know about:
From Rule 3
and from rule 12.
Click ✨ HERE ✨ For My Youtube Videos featuring Guides, Tips & Tricks for using D&D Beyond.
Need help with Homebrew? Check out ✨ this FAQ/Guide thread ✨ by IamSposta.
(DruidVSAdventure) Keep in mind that this project originally started as two HB Sorcerer subclasses one being just a new Wild Magic Surge table and the other the Time based subclass which then lead to creating new subclasses then the whole class itself. The reason for using various sources from various class and subclass features was to create a buffed version of the Sorcerer while granting great subclass options Example: The Mark of the Open Mind is heavily inspired by the Psi-based Rogue and Fighter subclasses which I figured would be cool to have a spellcaster with similar features.
DruidVSAdventure
Check out my Homebrew Class The Evoker
Simple. Don't publish it on D&D Beyond. D&D Beyond doesn't have the infrastructure to allow homebrewing a whole class, and you're not supposed to try to work around that.
Look at what you've done. You spoiled it. You have nobody to blame but yourself. Go sit and think about your actions.
Don't be mean. Rudeness is a vicious cycle, and it has to stop somewhere. Exceptions for things that are funny.
Go to the current Competition of the Finest 'Brews! It's a cool place where cool people make cool things.
How I'm posting based on text formatting: Mod Hat Off - Mod Hat Also Off (I'm not a mod)