I would say that while we do need to address the place of devils and demons in the world, we could probably do better than a direct copy of the forgotten realms.
Also the crossover seems kinda sketch... I think the weretigers and rakshasas might fit better as, say, a remote monastery home to powerful weretiger warriors and rakshasa archmages. (just a random suggestion because pairing the two is a cool idea)
Aye. Those were a large change to the world on the level of the 5 wizards
Honestly I think the Fang is very good, just remove the "Faerun" bit. As an organization, they stand out without having to open a ton of questions by doing crossover shenanigans.
I hope my weretiger army got accepted. I'm thinking of them as CG mercenaries.
I like them they are a fun faction to use. What is there role in the setting then the factions we have are focused on exploring the world or cults. What is there influence, do they recruit people, where is there base?
Honestly I think the Fang is very good, just remove the "Faerun" bit. As an organization, they stand out without having to open a ton of questions by doing crossover shenanigans.
Oh... okay sorry I didn't read but I might be able to redesign it a bit...? But I just can't part with the idea that they're from another dimension.
Alright, I'll bite. Why do they have to be from a different dimension?
The Fang of Faerun's base is in a jungle outpost. Their members are mostly named after nature (inspired after warrior cats)
2 squads, River Squad and Starry Squad, each squad leader is below an officer, 100 weretigers per squad, and the commanders and generals are above the officers. Then there's simple warriors.
Fang of Faerun members:
(General) Echostride: Male missing an ear, prefers hybrid form, like most Fang of Faerun members. Leader, quite charismatic. Longleap and Goldenpaw's father, married to Silvergleam.
(Commander) Longleap: Young female, second-in-command. Sweet on the outside and fierce on the inside.
(General) Silvergleam: Older female bearing the scars of battle, mother of Longleap and Goldenpaw. Is very fierce on the outside but kinda sweet on the inside, the opposite of her daughter.
(Commander) Goldenpaw. Young male with temper problems. Has a scar over one eye from an altercation with a wereboar in childhood. Actually a nice guy on the inside.
Various other warriors:
(Officer) Pebblepelt, male
(Officer) Cloudclaw, female
(River Squad Leader) Featherlight, male
(Starry Squad Leader) Pinecone, female
I hope it does. Please find a place for the Fang of Faerun in your world cause I worked a lot on it
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Tried to make an emote there. If the Fang of Faerun is accepted I'll be very happy.
I think that they should be related to the sphinx born tabaxi as maybe a combat wing or a group that went rogue
Hmm...Maybe I'll give Silvergleam sphinx tabaxi ancestry.
please just don't make it from another dimension it makes no sense storywise
Honestly I think the Fang is very good, just remove the "Faerun" bit. As an organization, they stand out without having to open a ton of questions by doing crossover shenanigans.
Oh... okay sorry I didn't read but I might be able to redesign it a bit...? But I just can't part with the idea that they're from another dimension.
Alright, I'll bite. Why do they have to be from a different dimension?
I want this sort of thing where someone mentions "This feels like home" and the other asks "Home? What home?" and then the other tells them all about the way they woke up here all of a sudden and then sobs saying they disagree with the general opinion and want to go home. Also I want the crew members bringing up quirky traditions that others just find outright weird and I wanted them to have that kind of outsider feel you don't get if they're just from a distant land.
You can make it this way without them having come from faerun not to mention warrior cats
I think it is greatly made and thoroughly constructed, with well-characterized NPCs and structure. As a faction, it adds something new and weretigers are underappreciated so you adding them here is great. I certainly do not want it removed from the world.
Also I just realized something: travel between material planes is canon in 5e, but requires great arcane power, definitely in the form of spelljammers for a force of this size. Are they refugees fleeing from rakshasa overlords? An advance team for a larger force? Something else? The implications could lead to some interesting campaigns!
(I'm going to leave it up to @ARandomHipporiff, as the Fang is their creation)
Should planes like the 9 hells and the celestial planes exist. I think if we add planes then they should be entirely new ones if we have planes at all.
Aye. Those were a large change to the world on the level of the 5 wizards
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Honestly I think the Fang is very good, just remove the "Faerun" bit. As an organization, they stand out without having to open a ton of questions by doing crossover shenanigans.
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I like them they are a fun faction to use. What is there role in the setting then the factions we have are focused on exploring the world or cults. What is there influence, do they recruit people, where is there base?
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At the very least, don't name it the fang of "faerun." faerun is a continent in the forgotten realms.
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Alright, I'll bite. Why do they have to be from a different dimension?
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please just don't make it from another dimension it makes no sense storywise
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You can make it this way without them having come from faerun not to mention warrior cats
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I think it is greatly made and thoroughly constructed, with well-characterized NPCs and structure. As a faction, it adds something new and weretigers are underappreciated so you adding them here is great. I certainly do not want it removed from the world.
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Also I just realized something: travel between material planes is canon in 5e, but requires great arcane power, definitely in the form of spelljammers for a force of this size. Are they refugees fleeing from rakshasa overlords? An advance team for a larger force? Something else? The implications could lead to some interesting campaigns!
(I'm going to leave it up to @ARandomHipporiff, as the Fang is their creation)
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Should planes like the 9 hells and the celestial planes exist. I think if we add planes then they should be entirely new ones if we have planes at all.
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