The Competition of the Finest Brews IV
Poll: DM Option: Relativistic Revelry
DM Option: Relativistic Revelry - Score
- Zenlos2_0's Dagaz Raido 3.273
- Smokehorn_knight_of_Cats's Gravity Trap 2.818
- Yamana_Eajii's Chronurgal Glory 3.273
- Thauraeln_The_Bold's Portal Dragon 3.750
- MilestoGo_24's Temporal Anomaly 3.636
- Third_Sundering's Living Paradox 3.727
- Drumitch's Chronomite Swarm 3.636
- ThorukDuckSlayer's Mirror of Missed Opportunities 3.750
- HomebrewMindFlayer's Crushers 3.917
Ended Nov 14, 2021
Poll: PC Option: Spellcaster Shutdown
PC Option: Spellcaster Shutdown - Score
- Thauraeln_The_Bold's Spellslayer 3.385
- Yamana_Eajii's College of Wishes 2.909
- MilestoGo_24's Antimagic Gate 3.636
- Zenlos2_0's Warp Weave 3.545
- FallenPhoenixIV's Dampen Spell 3.545
- Drumitch's Sealer 3.333
- HomebrewMindFlayer's Spell Duelist 3.615
- Stephanie252's Spell Eater 3.182
Ended Nov 14, 2021
Poll: Inspirational Option: Festivals and Gatherings
Inspirational Option: Festivals and Gatherings - Score
- Zenlos2_0's The Spirit Game 3.167
- Thauraeln_The_Bold's Ordenstone 3.556
- Yamana_Eajii's Mixed Spell Schools/Chaotic Celebrant 3.333
- Drumitch's Savage Snowball Fight 4.111
- ThorukDuckSlayer's Festival of Petty Disputes 3.429
Ended Nov 14, 2021
You using 3.0 coding for that homebrewery doc? I'm still playing with the coding myself but I see some parts that I could help clean it up.
Try doing this for the minor wish coding;
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Why is it I always find myself with ideas for the wrong categories?
I have a monster who's related to shutting down spells!
I shall have a ponder on what to do that actually fits!
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Oh shoot. There's a 3v? Well, that's new.
Here's the new link, then. https://homebrewery.naturalcrit.com/share/1KOgEbPngbTMkcnILYDeN0VNvUsMHcFf6t5wgNIZeLA8Z Thanks so much Phoenix, this is a wonderful new learning curve!
Frequent Eladrin || They/Them, but accept all pronouns
Luz Noceda would like to remind you that you're worth loving!
How's about you reform the monster to be some form of added feat that the Beast Master Ranger can take, to gain use of your monster as an ally, as well as use a strange special action?
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Luz Noceda would like to remind you that you're worth loving!
I'm glad you like it! That subclass is a really cool concept, and I think you executed it well!
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If there was no light, people wouldn't fear the dark.
Here’s mine (for now):
DM Thing: Temporal Anomaly
Player Thing: Antimagic Gate
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I am an Archfey, but nobody seems to notice.
Extended Signature
Looks really great!
Temporal Anomaly is truly terrifying. I can't tell if it's balanced, but it's terrifying nonetheless.
Antimagic Gate is so weird and cool! I'm not sure of balance, but it is incredibly cool. The range of Touch doesn't make sense, however - what are you touching? Self (10-foot line) or 30 feet (10-foot line) make more sense. Also, the line is up to 30-foot wide, is it? Just for clarity. Otherwise, excellent!
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Luz Noceda would like to remind you that you're worth loving!
Warp weave
A 2nd level spells, to damage concentrating casters.
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Intent is to touch both of the pillars in the casting.
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Super harsh critique:
It ends dealing maybe up to around 13d8 damage if the original caster succeeds on all con saves until the spell ends (average 52 damage, max 104 damage) when cast at its lowest level, and the fact this spell is a ritual makes 100% no sense in this case, as does the material component (what do knots and gold have to do with concentration)? The formatting on your end is a bit weird and the spelling is flawed.
Secondary super nice critique:
Really great idea. Execution is flawed, but it ain't no Find Traps. I love the idea so much, would you mind trying to remake it? Don't rush too much if you do, it's just the base idea is so cool.
Frequent Eladrin || They/Them, but accept all pronouns
Luz Noceda would like to remind you that you're worth loving!
Very situational, but pretty good.
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Response to mean critique
Yeah, the damage is bit much, but this a situational spell, and it's unlikely to get that much damage out of it, I'll probally put a save to land the spell though.Yeah the ritual is kinda dumb, the golden thread is an obvious mention to the weave.
Response to nicer response
Thanks, I will work on spelling. EDIT: the spell has not even a single spelling mistake WTF you talking about.
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A remade version, with a saving throw to land, and slightly reduced damage
https://www.dndbeyond.com/spells/1158976-warp-weave
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The more I though about it, I'm going to go with my 2nd-level spell, Dampen Spell. Probably one of my favorite homebrew spells I've made honestly.
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Please, don't swear. But by spelling mistakes I meant ending a scentance.And not adding a space after. Like I just showed.
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Luz Noceda would like to remind you that you're worth loving!
Very fun spell! It's simple, but that only makes it better.
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If there was no light, people wouldn't fear the dark.
Really cool stuff! Temporal Anomaly is interesting and a fun potential plot device, while Antimagic Gate is both a great ward and a clever trap that can be used in a multitude of ways with enough ingenuity.
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If there was no light, people wouldn't fear the dark.
I think this could be 2d10/2d8/2d6 reduction, plus an additional die for each level above 2nd, and lose the attack stuff? Otherwise, it really is a great low-level counterspell
Frequent Eladrin || They/Them, but accept all pronouns
Luz Noceda would like to remind you that you're worth loving!
Looks cool. That said, damage is usually the least of my worries from a spellcaster. (This isn't a critique of your spell, just an observation. The spell's great, it's not supposed to help against secondary effects.
I totally advise riding an animated castle.
Would a random encounter table or full encounter be fine as long as its within the category rules?
The Circle of Hedgehogs Druid Beholder/Animated Armor Level -20 Bard of the OIADSB Cult, here are our rules. Sig. Also a sauce council member, but it's been dead for a while.