I wanted to make a D&D barbarian subclass with some abilities to keep enemies close to them. The opportunity attack is worded the way it is so that it cannot be abused as easily by things such as polearm master for balance reasons, but something like sentinel can still work well with the class. Any feedback is appreciated!
I think you have the option of adding more things at new levels. for instance your 14th level one would fit better as an 18th or 19th level ability
I believe I have tried that before, but at the time the system did not like that and I had to keep it to the levels subclasses generally get something extra. Has it changed?
https://www.dndbeyond.com/subclasses/1421194-path-of-the-starcallers
I wanted to make a D&D barbarian subclass with some abilities to keep enemies close to them. The opportunity attack is worded the way it is so that it cannot be abused as easily by things such as polearm master for balance reasons, but something like sentinel can still work well with the class. Any feedback is appreciated!
Homebrews!
Subclasses: The Agrippa | Oath of the Gambler | Isekai Domain | Path of the Starcallers | Oath of Nature | Vanguard
Spells: Lyneus' Chained Dance | Lyneus' Aftershock | Hex of Inversion | Zone of Inversion | Defenestrate Creature | Greater Shield | Merle's Revealing Web | Merle's Wavelength Manipulation | Merle's Burning Muscles
Feats: Mobile Retriever | Dual Mind | Tenacious
Items: Ring of the Spectral Rider | Cursed Mocking Sword
I think you have the option of adding more things at new levels. for instance your 14th level one would fit better as an 18th or 19th level ability
I believe I have tried that before, but at the time the system did not like that and I had to keep it to the levels subclasses generally get something extra. Has it changed?
Homebrews!
Subclasses: The Agrippa | Oath of the Gambler | Isekai Domain | Path of the Starcallers | Oath of Nature | Vanguard
Spells: Lyneus' Chained Dance | Lyneus' Aftershock | Hex of Inversion | Zone of Inversion | Defenestrate Creature | Greater Shield | Merle's Revealing Web | Merle's Wavelength Manipulation | Merle's Burning Muscles
Feats: Mobile Retriever | Dual Mind | Tenacious
Items: Ring of the Spectral Rider | Cursed Mocking Sword
i dont know, ive never done a barbarian subclass
In any case, I've reworked the subclass slightly and nerfed the 14th level ability as well.
Homebrews!
Subclasses: The Agrippa | Oath of the Gambler | Isekai Domain | Path of the Starcallers | Oath of Nature | Vanguard
Spells: Lyneus' Chained Dance | Lyneus' Aftershock | Hex of Inversion | Zone of Inversion | Defenestrate Creature | Greater Shield | Merle's Revealing Web | Merle's Wavelength Manipulation | Merle's Burning Muscles
Feats: Mobile Retriever | Dual Mind | Tenacious
Items: Ring of the Spectral Rider | Cursed Mocking Sword