bro what the L skibidi ohio rizz sigma is going on
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what the skibidi L sigma are you gyatts yapping about? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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White Male, Teenager, AuDHD, Furry (yes I'm a furry and idgaf), Old Music nerd 🤓 (No pop, hip hop or country for me thank you!), I'm also a drummer cause y not. The music I'm listening to at the moment: Foo Fighters/The Who/Acceptance. What I'm watching at the moment: Hazbin Hotel. What I'm games I'm playing at the moment: D&D/Testplaying my platformer. - Wonderful Radio London
Hmmm... first off, feel free to use my contributions to the world as much as you want. Second off, I wish I had some good advice, but I've only ever studied writing and have yet to put it into practice, which makes me sound like an idiot honestly.
Much appreciated, and there’s no need to deprecate your abilities. You’re a fine writer. I’m sure you have much more experience than I do, and I know for a fact your grasp of the language is better than mine. I’m only doing this in an attempt to cultivate a specific writing style I can depend on in the future, for fun.
Hmmm... first off, feel free to use my contributions to the world as much as you want. Second off, I wish I had some good advice, but I've only ever studied writing and have yet to put it into practice, which makes me sound like an idiot honestly.
Much appreciated, and there’s no need to deprecate your abilities. You’re a fine writer. I’m sure you have much more experience than I do, and I know for a fact your grasp of the language is better than mine. I’m only doing this in an attempt to cultivate a specific writing style I can depend on in the future, for fun.
So, you want my honest advice? Screw the exposition. Literally trash it. Start off with a place the audience will understand from the genre, you know, like a port or something. Let only a little bit of Lubridium flavor shine here. Slowly, slowly pan out to reveal the weirdness and wackiness of your universe.
Infodumping, even if it's "Show, don't tell," is annoying. Maybe it's just a me thing, though. They're not expecting a masterclass in writing either, I'm guessing, and once again I've never written an actual story longer than three or four notebook pages, so take everything I suggest with a huge grain of salt.
If this is unclear, I will reiterate: I may sound confident, but I am not an author. Yet.
So, you want my honest advice? Screw the exposition. Literally trash it. Start off with a place the audience will understand from the genre, you know, like a port or something. Let only a little bit of Lubridium flavor shine here. Slowly, slowly pan out to reveal the weirdness and wackiness of your universe.
Infodumping, even if it's "Show, don't tell," is annoying. Maybe it's just a me thing, though. They're not expecting a masterclass in writing either, I'm guessing, and once again I've never written an actual story longer than three or four notebook pages, so take everything I suggest with a huge grain of salt.
If this is unclear, I will reiterate: I may sound confident, but I am not an author. Yet.
Thanks for the advice. I’ll do my best to follow it. My biggest concern so far has definitely been my doing a little too much infodumping, or doing it in an annoying and confusing way (such as nonsensical namedropping in the fourth paragraph). This is what I have so far, if you’re interested. No need to read it, I won’t be offended.
Surriento, Regno di Napoli, Italia; 1696
It pains me to no small degree to admit just how intrigued I am by the wounded pirate lying passed-out in my garden.
Thrice now I’ve walked past him, twice to water my tomatoes and once to scare off the gulls. While my investment in this scoundrel’s safety is hardly exceptional, the birds are scarily large and I have no desire to see such a fresh enigma carried off by buzzards.
His origins are no mystery. The rat’s sleeve is embroidered with a poorly-stitched insignia depicting a skeletal hand holding a torch. I know its meaning just as well as the next diver: faded red flames to represent the fires of rebellion, the hand to represent a certain Captain’s guiding hand through the darkness of war. It’s laughably egotistical, but then again pride is the least of his crimes.
So this pirate is a member of the self-christened Notched Blades, that notorious band of loosely-connected factions prowling the waters to the East. The valiant freedom fighters determined to put a stop to perceived commercial overreach from the United Merchant Conglomerate and their quiet British Imperial sponsors. It’s hardly an insightful conclusion; there aren’t many corsairs still in operation in this part of the world.
None of my newfound insights help in the slightest to explain what this self-interested degenerate is doing in my garden. Does my five-foot wooden fence do nothing to deter heavily wounded intruders? This marauder is very possibly lying on a floral deathbed of peonies and rutabaga, and it seems I have little recourse but to watch and wait for him to die. Shame, but my training is decidedly not medical.
Over the next few days, the half-dead pirate […]
I’m well aware this is unlikely to win any awards. I just want a fun way to get back into writing, with the possibility of recognition as an extra bit of motivation.
Soo....last comment...I mean...I am there for now.
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bro what the L skibidi ohio rizz sigma is going on
White Male, Teenager, AuDHD, Furry (yes I'm a furry and idgaf), Old Music nerd 🤓 (No pop, hip hop or country for me thank you!), I'm also a drummer cause y not. The music I'm listening to at the moment: Foo Fighters/The Who/Acceptance. What I'm watching at the moment: Hazbin Hotel. What I'm games I'm playing at the moment: D&D/Testplaying my platformer. - Wonderful Radio London
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I am also a eepy eeper, who likes WoF, WC, and fire.
Brain rot is so sigma. Don't be a cheugy PlatyLRizz. Mew up your profile. Ain't no Ohio drip like the on fleek aura of a bussin' fam, no cap.
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Karl Erikson, No Guts No Glory | Chipper, Curse of Strahd
Silverwood Group 1 | Silverwood Group 2
Get rickrolled here. Awesome music here. Track 52, 12/23/25, O Holy Night
PlatyLRizz? naw Platybeta, ain't that boss ALPHA SIGMA
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💛🤍💜🖤 🩷💛💙
Salem has dubbed me Fellow Pancake of The Fox.
Henlo, I am a pan, NB, chaotic ADHD mess of a furry.
I am also a eepy eeper, who likes WoF, WC, and fire.
STOP THE BRAIN ROT! STOP THE BRAIN ROT! STOP THE BRAIN ROT! THOSE WHO WISH TO JOIN ME MUST QUOTE THIS AND SAY "STOP THE BRAIN ROT" OVER AND OVER!
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I am secretly a green dragon. Also a Demon Lord.
What the sigma?
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Belolonandalogalo, Sunny
Eggo Lass, Bone and Oblivion | Tendilius Mondhaven Paxaramus, Drakkenheim
Karl Erikson, No Guts No Glory | Chipper, Curse of Strahd
Silverwood Group 1 | Silverwood Group 2
Get rickrolled here. Awesome music here. Track 52, 12/23/25, O Holy Night
Nahhh it's not the Sigma.... it's about the Ypsilon Bravo Ohmicron Nu Epsilon...
My Ready-to-rock&roll chars:
Dertinus Tristany // Amilcar Barca // Vicenç Sacrarius // Oriol Deulofeu // Grovtuk
what the skibidi L sigma are you gyatts yapping about? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
White Male, Teenager, AuDHD, Furry (yes I'm a furry and idgaf), Old Music nerd 🤓 (No pop, hip hop or country for me thank you!), I'm also a drummer cause y not. The music I'm listening to at the moment: Foo Fighters/The Who/Acceptance. What I'm watching at the moment: Hazbin Hotel. What I'm games I'm playing at the moment: D&D/Testplaying my platformer. - Wonderful Radio London
Dertinus!!
Terra Lubridia archive:
The Bloody Barnacle | The Gut | The Athene Crusader | The Jewel of Atlantis
Read only the Capital letters...... or should I have to do a facepalm cannon.
My Ready-to-rock&roll chars:
Dertinus Tristany // Amilcar Barca // Vicenç Sacrarius // Oriol Deulofeu // Grovtuk
Much appreciated, and there’s no need to deprecate your abilities. You’re a fine writer. I’m sure you have much more experience than I do, and I know for a fact your grasp of the language is better than mine. I’m only doing this in an attempt to cultivate a specific writing style I can depend on in the future, for fun.
Terra Lubridia archive:
The Bloody Barnacle | The Gut | The Athene Crusader | The Jewel of Atlantis
So, you want my honest advice? Screw the exposition. Literally trash it. Start off with a place the audience will understand from the genre, you know, like a port or something. Let only a little bit of Lubridium flavor shine here. Slowly, slowly pan out to reveal the weirdness and wackiness of your universe.
Infodumping, even if it's "Show, don't tell," is annoying. Maybe it's just a me thing, though. They're not expecting a masterclass in writing either, I'm guessing, and once again I've never written an actual story longer than three or four notebook pages, so take everything I suggest with a huge grain of salt.
If this is unclear, I will reiterate: I may sound confident, but I am not an author. Yet.
Let him who is without sin cast the first stone.
Awake, impure, divine
Breathgiver of the Strugels
By the way, do you guys know about Nosk?
I make strange but effective solutions to your DM problems!
Homebrew: Monsters Species Spells Background(s)
I am secretly a green dragon. Also a Demon Lord.
Nope
This is a signature. It was a simple signature. But it has been upgraded.
Belolonandalogalo, Sunny
Eggo Lass, Bone and Oblivion | Tendilius Mondhaven Paxaramus, Drakkenheim
Karl Erikson, No Guts No Glory | Chipper, Curse of Strahd
Silverwood Group 1 | Silverwood Group 2
Get rickrolled here. Awesome music here. Track 52, 12/23/25, O Holy Night
And hola, Dertinus! ¿Como estás?
This is a signature. It was a simple signature. But it has been upgraded.
Belolonandalogalo, Sunny
Eggo Lass, Bone and Oblivion | Tendilius Mondhaven Paxaramus, Drakkenheim
Karl Erikson, No Guts No Glory | Chipper, Curse of Strahd
Silverwood Group 1 | Silverwood Group 2
Get rickrolled here. Awesome music here. Track 52, 12/23/25, O Holy Night
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I make strange but effective solutions to your DM problems!
Homebrew: Monsters Species Spells Background(s)
I am secretly a green dragon. Also a Demon Lord.
Thanks for the advice. I’ll do my best to follow it. My biggest concern so far has definitely been my doing a little too much infodumping, or doing it in an annoying and confusing way (such as nonsensical namedropping in the fourth paragraph). This is what I have so far, if you’re interested. No need to read it, I won’t be offended.
Surriento, Regno di Napoli, Italia; 1696
It pains me to no small degree to admit just how intrigued I am by the wounded pirate lying passed-out in my garden.
Thrice now I’ve walked past him, twice to water my tomatoes and once to scare off the gulls. While my investment in this scoundrel’s safety is hardly exceptional, the birds are scarily large and I have no desire to see such a fresh enigma carried off by buzzards.
His origins are no mystery. The rat’s sleeve is embroidered with a poorly-stitched insignia depicting a skeletal hand holding a torch. I know its meaning just as well as the next diver: faded red flames to represent the fires of rebellion, the hand to represent a certain Captain’s guiding hand through the darkness of war. It’s laughably egotistical, but then again pride is the least of his crimes.
So this pirate is a member of the self-christened Notched Blades, that notorious band of loosely-connected factions prowling the waters to the East. The valiant freedom fighters determined to put a stop to perceived commercial overreach from the United Merchant Conglomerate and their quiet British Imperial sponsors. It’s hardly an insightful conclusion; there aren’t many corsairs still in operation in this part of the world.
None of my newfound insights help in the slightest to explain what this self-interested degenerate is doing in my garden. Does my five-foot wooden fence do nothing to deter heavily wounded intruders? This marauder is very possibly lying on a floral deathbed of peonies and rutabaga, and it seems I have little recourse but to watch and wait for him to die. Shame, but my training is decidedly not medical.
Over the next few days, the half-dead pirate […]
I’m well aware this is unlikely to win any awards. I just want a fun way to get back into writing, with the possibility of recognition as an extra bit of motivation.
Terra Lubridia archive:
The Bloody Barnacle | The Gut | The Athene Crusader | The Jewel of Atlantis
I’m not liking the way this looks at all. The writing style is somehow very grating, and I don’t know how to fix it.
Terra Lubridia archive:
The Bloody Barnacle | The Gut | The Athene Crusader | The Jewel of Atlantis
*nah s'good, mate!*
Sig but long ^w^
Gulpmissle Day, Saturday, Feburay 15th, 2025
💛🤍💜🖤 🩷💛💙
Salem has dubbed me Fellow Pancake of The Fox.
Henlo, I am a pan, NB, chaotic ADHD mess of a furry.
I am also a eepy eeper, who likes WoF, WC, and fire.
Soo....last comment...I mean...I am there for now.
I have made a huge homebrew setting that I am still working on putting here in DDB. Please give me feedback, I want to know all of what I am doing wrong, and what I am doing right. The thread is a huge work in progress, so everything in it from content to layout is subject to change. Please check this forum: Welcome to Zionderia
Also I have a fun thread that explores an idea about dreams based off the movie Inception. I still need to add the link but stay tuned.