I made this homebrew, but something about it doesnt feel quite right. Is it just me? If there is something wrong with this, let me know so I can fix it.
It's incredibly strong. Your whole party gets advantage on attack and skill rolls forever if they stay near you. And not even that near you. And all incoming melee attacks are at disadvantage. This thing could be a pretty good contender for best level 20 capstone feature of any class. It could be reduced to 1 round per long rest and it would still be stronger than most other feats unless you were maybe a party of 2 characters.
When does it grant the temp hp? When they enter the aura? Start of their turn? It needs a triggering moment.
If you just want it to be clearly worded, you need to fix the second thing. If you want it to be balanced in any way, you need to severely tone it down.
It's incredibly strong. Your whole party gets advantage on attack and skill rolls forever if they stay near you. And not even that near you. And all incoming melee attacks are at disadvantage. This thing could be a pretty good contender for best level 20 capstone feature of any class. It could be reduced to 1 round per long rest and it would still be stronger than most other feats unless you were maybe a party of 2 characters.
When does it grant the temp hp? When they enter the aura? Start of their turn? It needs a triggering moment.
If you just want it to be clearly worded, you need to fix the second thing. If you want it to be balanced in any way, you need to severely tone it down.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/feats/306143-aura-of-inspiration
I made this homebrew, but something about it doesnt feel quite right. Is it just me? If there is something wrong with this, let me know so I can fix it.
A couple things:
If you just want it to be clearly worded, you need to fix the second thing. If you want it to be balanced in any way, you need to severely tone it down.
My homebrew subclasses (full list here)
(Artificer) Swordmage | Glasswright | (Barbarian) Path of the Savage Embrace
(Bard) College of Dance | (Fighter) Warlord | Cannoneer
(Monk) Way of the Elements | (Ranger) Blade Dancer
(Rogue) DaggerMaster | Inquisitor | (Sorcerer) Riftwalker | Spellfist
(Warlock) The Swarm
Okay. I'll see what I can do.
Okay I think I fixed it
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https://www.dndbeyond.com/feats/309924-aura-of-inspiration