Reading through I noticed a couple of text/context errors. "The characters can use a siege weapon on their section of the wall against the defenders." The characters are the defenders, so the word defenders should say attackers or something to that effect. This is under the Overview. The next one is under Aftermath just after the first wave- it's the only line not in a text box for this section. "The characters have only a few minutes to heal or regroup when the second wave begins." This seems to imply there is a few minutes to heal and regroup as the second wave begins rather than, before the second wave. Which- I don't think would be possible as the distance from the fog to the walls is not a few minutes walk.
These are really minor of course but I think leaving them as is just kinda looks bad even if the adventure is free, and should be an easy fix.
Reading through I noticed a couple of text/context errors.
"The characters can use a siege weapon on their section of the wall against the defenders."
The characters are the defenders, so the word defenders should say attackers or something to that effect. This is under the Overview.
The next one is under Aftermath just after the first wave- it's the only line not in a text box for this section.
"The characters have only a few minutes to heal or regroup when the second wave begins."
This seems to imply there is a few minutes to heal and regroup as the second wave begins rather than, before the second wave. Which- I don't think would be possible as the distance from the fog to the walls is not a few minutes walk.
These are really minor of course but I think leaving them as is just kinda looks bad even if the adventure is free, and should be an easy fix.
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ModeratorI've passed those on to the devs for review. Thanks!
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