first of all I gotta say I'm overjoyed to see all the backgrounds from the basic rules. it makes character building that much more fun when your party isn't limited to a ragtag band of acolytes :P
some noticeable, but minor errors that I think should be fixed:
1. Sage background specialty (the one with the d8) reads "Librariand". easy enough fix I'm certain.
2.Acolyte refers to Appendix B about a sample pantheon from the FR, which assumes you are reading the players handbook alongside this. though useful for cross-referencing, the text in D&D beyond should also be cross-referential within itself. you made a appendix about Gods in the multiverse, this is a good place for a link.
reading through them it is all amazingly done, by the way! I look forward to seeing how this all interconnects with Stage 2!
PZ.
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first of all I gotta say I'm overjoyed to see all the backgrounds from the basic rules. it makes character building that much more fun when your party isn't limited to a ragtag band of acolytes :P
some noticeable, but minor errors that I think should be fixed:
1. Sage background specialty (the one with the d8) reads "Librariand". easy enough fix I'm certain.
2.Acolyte refers to Appendix B about a sample pantheon from the FR, which assumes you are reading the players handbook alongside this. though useful for cross-referencing, the text in D&D beyond should also be cross-referential within itself. you made a appendix about Gods in the multiverse, this is a good place for a link.
reading through them it is all amazingly done, by the way! I look forward to seeing how this all interconnects with Stage 2!
PZ.
I'm not - nor was I ever - your "obstacle" until you've deemed me as such, nor am I your wallet, my hard earnt money is not yours by deault.
Je suis Consumer - We are the foundation, the floor beneath your rug. our support is the fate of every retail product, business, and franchise. for success you need support.
I will always miss what you were, but I will never miss what you've become.
#OpenDnD #CanceltheSub #DnDBegone.#NeverForgive #NeverForget
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A dwarf with a canoe on his back? What could go wrong?
my pleasure! keep up the good work!
I'm not - nor was I ever - your "obstacle" until you've deemed me as such, nor am I your wallet, my hard earnt money is not yours by deault.
Je suis Consumer - We are the foundation, the floor beneath your rug. our support is the fate of every retail product, business, and franchise. for success you need support.
I will always miss what you were, but I will never miss what you've become.
#OpenDnD #CanceltheSub #DnDBegone.#NeverForgive #NeverForget