My wings were clipped, my heart in a chain, I suffered then, I walked through pain, but even now I know my strength, and I know I'll go any length to save the ones I love.
My least favorite person is me, but my favorite people are y'all.
You should make this attunement, and change the wording to the following:
“When casting a spell or using an ability that restores HP to a creature, you may add an extra 1d4 to the total amount of HP restored. In addition, when you make a saving throw against the poisoned condition or to resist a spell or ability that would bestow a curse on you (such as the Bestow Curse spell), you may add a 1d4 to your saving throw.”
Make this attunement, make it a very rare magic item, and change the wording to “While you are attuned to this ring, you have a +2 bonus to AC while you are not wearing armor or carrying a shield. Additionally, you have a +1 bonus to all saving throws.
Cursed: This item is cursed. While you are attuned to it, you have a -1 to weapon attack rolls and unarmed strikes.”
Actually I’m reviewing the soulstone and kind of have no idea what it does.
- What do you mean by Curses? There aren’t curses listed to pick from and I’m not sure how they relate - What does storing HP into the soulstone actually do? - Does the item give you extra dreas points? Or are you spending those dread points for the curse/hp stuff?
And a couple notes:
- Neutral, Enemy, and Willing should be replaced by just Willing and Unwilling - Remove the AC bonus, it doesn’t need to have it - Resistance to poison saves isn’t a thing, id suggest saying advantage on saves against the poisoned condition
I can reword the item once these clarifications are made.
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*hey Cyno and Gibber can you check PM's, i sent yall some homebrew*
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*hey Cyno and Gibber can you check PM's, i sent yall some homebrew*
*It’s not showing up, I think you forgot the underscore in my name, a lot of people do when they add me to PMS 😔*
*Hihihi Cyno, working on a new thread, highly video game themed.*
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My wings were clipped, my heart in a chain, I suffered then, I walked through pain, but even now I know my strength, and I know I'll go any length to save the ones I love.
My least favorite person is me, but my favorite people are y'all.
*hey Cyno and Gibber can you check PM's, i sent yall some homebrew*
*It’s not showing up, I think you forgot the underscore in my name, a lot of people do when they add me to PMS 😔*
*Hihihi Cyno, working on a new thread, highly video game themed.*
*sick!*
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— δ cyno • he/him • number one paladin fanδ — making a smoothie for meta ——————| EXTENDED SIG |—————— Φ • redpelt’s biggest fan :) DM, minmaxer, microbiology student, and lover of anything colored red • Φ
*hey Cyno and Gibber can you check PM's, i sent yall some homebrew*
*It’s not showing up, I think you forgot the underscore in my name, a lot of people do when they add me to PMS 😔*
*Hihihi Cyno, working on a new thread, highly video game themed.*
*sick!*
*Thanks!*
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My wings were clipped, my heart in a chain, I suffered then, I walked through pain, but even now I know my strength, and I know I'll go any length to save the ones I love.
My least favorite person is me, but my favorite people are y'all.
After one attack he lets Giratina have one more chance. "Go in peace now, or pay the price."
*care to explain the extra 2d10, the +26 damage, and the extra radiant damage?*
Tensors transformation (The shimmering armor) +10 dex +5 from ability of pain 11 from proficiency bonus, artifact. (I actually put less that I supposed to it's supposed to be 9
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Be sure to set your feet in the right place, then stand firm.
A set of shimmering armor surrounds him. "Let us resolve our ways now, either by us making up, or me making sure that you will not harm me, or any of my friends.
*If this is your Tenser’s, you need to state that you cast the spell because it has Verbal and Somatic components (which means physical and audio cues that he is casting it). It removes any confusion especially if you are about to fight. You can add flavor text along with casting the spell, and if you had stated you were casting a spell, Giratina may have acted differently/initiative may have been rolled right there.*
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— δ cyno • he/him • number one paladin fanδ — making a smoothie for meta ——————| EXTENDED SIG |—————— Φ • redpelt’s biggest fan :) DM, minmaxer, microbiology student, and lover of anything colored red • Φ
After one attack he lets Giratina have one more chance. "Go in peace now, or pay the price."
*care to explain the extra 2d10, the +26 damage, and the extra radiant damage?*
Tensors transformation (The shimmering armor) +10 dex +5 from ability of pain 11 from proficiency bonus, artifact. (I actually put less that I supposed to it's supposed to be 9
*I don’t know if any mods received the artifact, but if it’s the one you sent me for the Void Blade, it has no bonus to hit or damage on it.*
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— δ cyno • he/him • number one paladin fanδ — making a smoothie for meta ——————| EXTENDED SIG |—————— Φ • redpelt’s biggest fan :) DM, minmaxer, microbiology student, and lover of anything colored red • Φ
After one attack he lets Giratina have one more chance. "Go in peace now, or pay the price."
*care to explain the extra 2d10, the +26 damage, and the extra radiant damage?*
Tensors transformation (The shimmering armor) +10 dex +5 from ability of pain 11 from proficiency bonus, artifact. (I actually put less that I supposed to it's supposed to be 9
*I don’t know if any mods received the artifact, but if it’s the one you sent me for the Void Blade, it has no bonus to hit or damage on it.*
It's not homebrew, Umbraveth has a different one.
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Be sure to set your feet in the right place, then stand firm.
After one attack he lets Giratina have one more chance. "Go in peace now, or pay the price."
*care to explain the extra 2d10, the +26 damage, and the extra radiant damage?*
Tensors transformation (The shimmering armor) +10 dex +5 from ability of pain 11 from proficiency bonus, artifact. (I actually put less that I supposed to it's supposed to be 9
*I don’t know if any mods received the artifact, but if it’s the one you sent me for the Void Blade, it has no bonus to hit or damage on it.*
It's not homebrew, Umbraveth has a different one.
*Ah okay gotcha.*
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— δ cyno • he/him • number one paladin fanδ — making a smoothie for meta ——————| EXTENDED SIG |—————— Φ • redpelt’s biggest fan :) DM, minmaxer, microbiology student, and lover of anything colored red • Φ
After one attack he lets Giratina have one more chance. "Go in peace now, or pay the price."
*care to explain the extra 2d10, the +26 damage, and the extra radiant damage?*
Tensors transformation (The shimmering armor) +10 dex +5 from ability of pain 11 from proficiency bonus, artifact. (I actually put less that I supposed to it's supposed to be 9
*you don't add your pb to attacks, and that doesn't explain the 2d10 on both the main attack AND radiant extra*
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Pokemon Master, Hero of Hyrule, Jedi Knight, Minecrafter, Celestial Being Beyond Comprehension, Bounty Hunter, Salmon Runner, Nailmaster, Yarn Yoshi Enjoyer, Animal Lover, Math Rock Roller, Nerd King in all Aspects.
(And, of course, Dragon Tamer. It is in the name, after all)
After one attack he lets Giratina have one more chance. "Go in peace now, or pay the price."
*care to explain the extra 2d10, the +26 damage, and the extra radiant damage?*
Tensors transformation (The shimmering armor) +10 dex +5 from ability of pain 11 from proficiency bonus, artifact. (I actually put less that I supposed to it's supposed to be 9
*you don't add your pb to attacks, and that doesn't explain the 2d10 on both the main attack AND radiant extra*
*and how did you get a 6th level wizard-only spell?*
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Pokemon Master, Hero of Hyrule, Jedi Knight, Minecrafter, Celestial Being Beyond Comprehension, Bounty Hunter, Salmon Runner, Nailmaster, Yarn Yoshi Enjoyer, Animal Lover, Math Rock Roller, Nerd King in all Aspects.
(And, of course, Dragon Tamer. It is in the name, after all)
After one attack he lets Giratina have one more chance. "Go in peace now, or pay the price."
*care to explain the extra 2d10, the +26 damage, and the extra radiant damage?*
Tensors transformation (The shimmering armor) +10 dex +5 from ability of pain 11 from proficiency bonus, artifact. (I actually put less that I supposed to it's supposed to be 9
*you don't add your pb to attacks, and that doesn't explain the 2d10 on both the main attack AND radiant extra*
*I don't need the 2d10 for Tensors if that would take my turn I guess, and I do a my pb to my attack because of my unholy weapon.*
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Be sure to set your feet in the right place, then stand firm.
Finally back after a long break. Praise Jeff!
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*Alright looking forward to see what a full decked out correllion looks like*
fellow follower of JEFF!!!! and a fan of botw
Co-cult leader of the cynophobia cult
Archivist of the kingdoms and Crowns thread, Percy Jackson thread, and Mechanicus thread
*Hi Cyno*
My wings were clipped, my heart in a chain, I suffered then, I walked through pain, but even now I know my strength, and I know I'll go any length to save the ones I love.
My least favorite person is me, but my favorite people are y'all.
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*Hi naner*
fellow follower of JEFF!!!! and a fan of botw
Co-cult leader of the cynophobia cult
Archivist of the kingdoms and Crowns thread, Percy Jackson thread, and Mechanicus thread
*hey Cyno and Gibber can you check PM's, i sent yall some homebrew*
Even Girls enjoy D&D :3
*unnatural cyno responded to the homebrew earlier*
fellow follower of JEFF!!!! and a fan of botw
Co-cult leader of the cynophobia cult
Archivist of the kingdoms and Crowns thread, Percy Jackson thread, and Mechanicus thread
fellow follower of JEFF!!!! and a fan of botw
Co-cult leader of the cynophobia cult
Archivist of the kingdoms and Crowns thread, Percy Jackson thread, and Mechanicus thread
*It’s not showing up, I think you forgot the underscore in my name, a lot of people do when they add me to PMS 😔*
— δ cyno • he/him • number one paladin fan δ —
making a smoothie for meta
——————| EXTENDED SIG |——————
Φ • redpelt’s biggest fan :) DM, minmaxer, microbiology student, and lover of anything colored red • Φ
*Hihihi Cyno, working on a new thread, highly video game themed.*
My wings were clipped, my heart in a chain, I suffered then, I walked through pain, but even now I know my strength, and I know I'll go any length to save the ones I love.
My least favorite person is me, but my favorite people are y'all.
Extended Signature!
*brains*
fellow follower of JEFF!!!! and a fan of botw
Co-cult leader of the cynophobia cult
Archivist of the kingdoms and Crowns thread, Percy Jackson thread, and Mechanicus thread
*sick!*
— δ cyno • he/him • number one paladin fan δ —
making a smoothie for meta
——————| EXTENDED SIG |——————
Φ • redpelt’s biggest fan :) DM, minmaxer, microbiology student, and lover of anything colored red • Φ
*:)*
fellow follower of JEFF!!!! and a fan of botw
Co-cult leader of the cynophobia cult
Archivist of the kingdoms and Crowns thread, Percy Jackson thread, and Mechanicus thread
*Thanks!*
My wings were clipped, my heart in a chain, I suffered then, I walked through pain, but even now I know my strength, and I know I'll go any length to save the ones I love.
My least favorite person is me, but my favorite people are y'all.
Extended Signature!
Tensors transformation (The shimmering armor) +10 dex +5 from ability of pain 11 from proficiency bonus, artifact. (I actually put less that I supposed to it's supposed to be 9
Be sure to set your feet in the right place, then stand firm.
Finally back after a long break. Praise Jeff!
*If this is your Tenser’s, you need to state that you cast the spell because it has Verbal and Somatic components (which means physical and audio cues that he is casting it). It removes any confusion especially if you are about to fight. You can add flavor text along with casting the spell, and if you had stated you were casting a spell, Giratina may have acted differently/initiative may have been rolled right there.*
— δ cyno • he/him • number one paladin fan δ —
making a smoothie for meta
——————| EXTENDED SIG |——————
Φ • redpelt’s biggest fan :) DM, minmaxer, microbiology student, and lover of anything colored red • Φ
*I don’t know if any mods received the artifact, but if it’s the one you sent me for the Void Blade, it has no bonus to hit or damage on it.*
— δ cyno • he/him • number one paladin fan δ —
making a smoothie for meta
——————| EXTENDED SIG |——————
Φ • redpelt’s biggest fan :) DM, minmaxer, microbiology student, and lover of anything colored red • Φ
It's not homebrew, Umbraveth has a different one.
Be sure to set your feet in the right place, then stand firm.
Finally back after a long break. Praise Jeff!
*Ah okay gotcha.*
— δ cyno • he/him • number one paladin fan δ —
making a smoothie for meta
——————| EXTENDED SIG |——————
Φ • redpelt’s biggest fan :) DM, minmaxer, microbiology student, and lover of anything colored red • Φ
*you don't add your pb to attacks, and that doesn't explain the 2d10 on both the main attack AND radiant extra*
Pokemon Master, Hero of Hyrule, Jedi Knight, Minecrafter, Celestial Being Beyond Comprehension, Bounty Hunter, Salmon Runner, Nailmaster, Yarn Yoshi Enjoyer, Animal Lover, Math Rock Roller, Nerd King in all Aspects.
(And, of course, Dragon Tamer. It is in the name, after all)
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*and how did you get a 6th level wizard-only spell?*
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(And, of course, Dragon Tamer. It is in the name, after all)
#BRINGBACKNATIONALDEX
*I don't need the 2d10 for Tensors if that would take my turn I guess, and I do a my pb to my attack because of my unholy weapon.*
Be sure to set your feet in the right place, then stand firm.
Finally back after a long break. Praise Jeff!