Honestly, this is great, I kinda want to play it to troll my friends and it wouldn't destroy the balance of the game

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Ridiculously Impractical Attack needs some heavy rebalancing. Here is why:

This ability is essentially a watered down Meteor Swarm, a 9-th Level Evocation Spell. Watered down though it may be, it gives a few distinct advantages: no potential self-damage, Fighter capability to prevent foes from escaping their melee range (essentially mandating a large nuumber of enemies in the ability range), and impose disadvantage on a single enemy (meaning it's likely to nearly one-shot anything but a boss even at that level), as well as Fighters can be built to incorporate tons more damage into a single strike, meaning this would be added on top of the 30 damage they can do with the weapon alone. The main issue with giving that kind of firepower to a Fighter is that a Sorcerer or Wizard has at maximum only one 9th level spell, and they use their entire turn to cast it. This attack takes one of a Fighter's 4 actions, each action is able to deal upwards of 20 damage per hit. On top of that, this kind of ability is the pinnacle of a Wizard/Sorcerer class, and the whole way up the ladder they have to deal with all the drawbacks of being a squishy caster class at the benefit of having that kind of output in damage. Giving that level of damage (and more with their other actions) to a class that already has a whole crap ton going for it all the way up is what severely unbalances it.

 It's true that that ability is overpowered but you could modify it so it deals half damage to yourself or something and also like, a lot less damage and it would be more fair right? Or maybe make it cost all of a fighters actions and have some kind of other change. I don't really know but I'm sure there's a way to make it more balanced. At least I hope so because the rest of it seems really interesting and balanced to me.

Also that ability kind of reminds me of lynels from BOtW. It dealing op damage in a radius around it I mean.

Whatever as a said I am very new to D&D and I don't really know much about it, but this is a really great subclass so it would be a shame to not be able to use it just because of one ability. 

 So tru about the lynels, a silver one’s fire breath is the ultimate attack, and it’s op, just like this awesome subclass

 I want to progress this chain of events

 Okay

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Ridiculously Impractical Attack needs some heavy rebalancing. Here is why:

This ability is essentially a watered down Meteor Swarm, a 9-th Level Evocation Spell. Watered down though it may be, it gives a few distinct advantages: no potential self-damage, Fighter capability to prevent foes from escaping their melee range (essentially mandating a large nuumber of enemies in the ability range), and impose disadvantage on a single enemy (meaning it's likely to nearly one-shot anything but a boss even at that level), as well as Fighters can be built to incorporate tons more damage into a single strike, meaning this would be added on top of the 30 damage they can do with the weapon alone. The main issue with giving that kind of firepower to a Fighter is that a Sorcerer or Wizard has at maximum only one 9th level spell, and they use their entire turn to cast it. This attack takes one of a Fighter's 4 actions, each action is able to deal upwards of 20 damage per hit. On top of that, this kind of ability is the pinnacle of a Wizard/Sorcerer class, and the whole way up the ladder they have to deal with all the drawbacks of being a squishy caster class at the benefit of having that kind of output in damage. Giving that level of damage (and more with their other actions) to a class that already has a whole crap ton going for it all the way up is what severely unbalances it.

 It's true that that ability is overpowered but you could modify it so it deals half damage to yourself or something and also like, a lot less damage and it would be more fair right? Or maybe make it cost all of a fighters actions and have some kind of other change. I don't really know but I'm sure there's a way to make it more balanced. At least I hope so because the rest of it seems really interesting and balanced to me.

Also that ability kind of reminds me of lynels from BOtW. It dealing op damage in a radius around it I mean.

Whatever as a said I am very new to D&D and I don't really know much about it, but this is a really great subclass so it would be a shame to not be able to use it just because of one ability. 

 So tru about the lynels, a silver one’s fire breath is the ultimate attack, and it’s op, just like this awesome subclass

 I want to progress this chain of events

This is what I live for

I love that you forgot to make it so that you can only use a sword. Now I can just use an axe and b just as cool.

Before I even knew how to see home brew I tried to make something like this you beat me to it

It’s awesome.

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lol the last ability is pretty much meteor swarm

 Except only one meteor.

my day is better

lol the last ability is pretty much meteor swarm

I laughed for the first time in days when I read this, thank you.

Me: Sets filters to 500+ points

DnD Beyond: Shows me this

Me: "I should have known"

Could it Baby give you advantage on Deth saves and make it so that you regain 1 hit point on a 19 or 20? Your second one sounds really cool and fitting!

Effects that would instantly kill you, such as Power Word Kill or taking remaining damage exceeding your hit point maximum whilst at 0 hp, instead reduce you to 0 hit points.#

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Ridiculously Impractical Attack needs some heavy rebalancing. Here is why:

This ability is essentially a watered down Meteor Swarm, a 9-th Level Evocation Spell. Watered down though it may be, it gives a few distinct advantages: no potential self-damage, Fighter capability to prevent foes from escaping their melee range (essentially mandating a large nuumber of enemies in the ability range), and impose disadvantage on a single enemy (meaning it's likely to nearly one-shot anything but a boss even at that level), as well as Fighters can be built to incorporate tons more damage into a single strike, meaning this would be added on top of the 30 damage they can do with the weapon alone. The main issue with giving that kind of firepower to a Fighter is that a Sorcerer or Wizard has at maximum only one 9th level spell, and they use their entire turn to cast it. This attack takes one of a Fighter's 4 actions, each action is able to deal upwards of 20 damage per hit. On top of that, this kind of ability is the pinnacle of a Wizard/Sorcerer class, and the whole way up the ladder they have to deal with all the drawbacks of being a squishy caster class at the benefit of having that kind of output in damage. Giving that level of damage (and more with their other actions) to a class that already has a whole crap ton going for it all the way up is what severely unbalances it.

 It's true that that ability is overpowered but you could modify it so it deals half damage to yourself or something and also like, a lot less damage and it would be more fair right? Or maybe make it cost all of a fighters actions and have some kind of other change. I don't really know but I'm sure there's a way to make it more balanced. At least I hope so because the rest of it seems really interesting and balanced to me.

Also that ability kind of reminds me of lynels from BOtW. It dealing op damage in a radius around it I mean.

Whatever as a said I am very new to D&D and I don't really know much about it, but this is a really great subclass so it would be a shame to not be able to use it just because of one ability. 

 So tru about the lynels, a silver one’s fire breath is the ultimate attack, and it’s op, just like this awesome subclass

Joke Classes are already great to begin with, but an actually BALANCED one!?!? (totally using this if i can)

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Plot armor is underwhelming. Please consider further buffing the feature by adding one or both of the following effects:

• When you are reduced to 0 hit points, you can drop to one hit point instead. Once you drop to one hit point in this way, you cannot do so again until you complete a short rest.
• Effects that would instantly kill you, such as Power Word Kill or taking remaining damage exceeding your hit point maximum whilst at 0 hp, instead reduce you to 0 hit points.

 
Hi, and thanks for the feedback!

I won't be supporting this site with updates any longer, but feel free to use your second buff in your game if you use this, it's pretty cool and won't come up often, with the caveat that you must finish a Long Rest before you can use it again after you survive using it.

The first suggestion steps on a lot of other features' toes (like Half-orc), and I wouldn't recommend it personally.

Plot armor is underwhelming. Please consider further buffing the feature by adding one or both of the following effects:

• When you are reduced to 0 hit points, you can drop to one hit point instead. Once you drop to one hit point in this way, you cannot do so again until you complete a short rest.
• Effects that would instantly kill you, such as Power Word Kill or taking remaining damage exceeding your hit point maximum whilst at 0 hp, instead reduce you to 0 hit points.

*jaw lowers*

Acouple things I'd change like plot armor buffed to also have something similar to unarmored strike but this is honestly sick as hell

This is actually kind of balanced. Like this is weaker than clerics, wizards, sorcerers, and druids.