You have mastered ranged weapons, reacting to every opening an enemy presents. You gain the following benefits:
Enemies either prone or within 5ft no longer cause disadvantage and they take additional damage equal to your dexterity modifier when hit.
Enemies trigger an opportunity attack when they enter or exit any space within 10ft of you.
If you or an ally within 30ft are the target of a ranged attack (hit or miss) you may use your reaction to return fire.
If your ranged attack brings an enemy to 0 hp the projectile penetrates, traveling an additional 5ft and any creature occupying that space takes damage equal to your dexterity modifier.
Your wording is super ambiguous, it never specified “ranged weapon attacks” so theoretically this feat would even apply to punches. Also ambiguous wording about the penetration makes no sense because it reads as if there were two creatures in the same space instead of one behind the other. Overall it is overpowered and overlaps with the crossbow expert feat.
You have mastered ranged weapons, reacting to every opening an enemy presents. Your ranged weapon attacks gain the following benefits:
Enemies, either prone or within 5ft, no longer cause disadvantage and they take additional damage equal to your dexterity modifier when hit.
Enemies trigger an opportunity attack when they enter or exit any space within 10ft of you.
If you or an ally within 30ft are the target of a ranged weapon attack (hit or miss) you may use your reaction to return fire.
If your ranged weapon attack brings an enemy to 0 hp the projectile penetrates, traveling an additional 5ft into the following space and any creature occupying that space takes damage equal to your dexterity modifier.
Try this, it’s still probably a little overpowered, but at least the language is cleaned up and more specific.
You have mastered ranged weapons, reacting to every opening an enemy presents. You gain the following benefits:
You no longer suffer disadvantage on ranged weapon attacks against opponents who are prone, or within 5 ft.
When an enemy moves within 10 feet of you, you may immediately use your reaction to make a ranged weapon attack against that creature.
When a creature targets you or an ally within 30 feet with a ranged attack, you may immediately use your reaction to make a ranged weapon attack against that creature.
When one of your ranged weapon attacks reduces a creature to 0 HP, if there is a creature on the opposite side of the target and within 5 of it, they must succeed at a Dexterity saving throw with a DC equal to 8 + your Dexterity modifier + your proficiency bonus or take 1d6 damage of the same type as the initial attack.
Actually, with the language cleaned up this is pretty good. Do you know how to code it so it works and looks good on the character sheet?
I added it, but it doesn’t work with the character sheet. It shows up, but it doesn’t actually add the reactions and stuff. Would you like me to help you code a version that works on the back end?
Thoughts?
https://www.dndbeyond.com/feats/268833-ranged-combat-master
You have mastered ranged weapons, reacting to every opening an enemy presents. You gain the following benefits:
Your wording is super ambiguous, it never specified “ranged weapon attacks” so theoretically this feat would even apply to punches. Also ambiguous wording about the penetration makes no sense because it reads as if there were two creatures in the same space instead of one behind the other. Overall it is overpowered and overlaps with the crossbow expert feat.
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I updated the wording,
You have mastered ranged weapons, reacting to every opening an enemy presents. Your ranged weapon attacks gain the following benefits:
Try this, it’s still probably a little overpowered, but at least the language is cleaned up and more specific.
Actually, with the language cleaned up this is pretty good. Do you know how to code it so it works and looks good on the character sheet?
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I really like many of the changes, that does sound better, thanks, that is what I get for writing it at 2am.
You can add it as a feat, just enable homebrew for the character.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/feats/270131-ranged-combat-master
I added it, but it doesn’t work with the character sheet. It shows up, but it doesn’t actually add the reactions and stuff. Would you like me to help you code a version that works on the back end?
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I updated it with the reactions. https://www.dndbeyond.com/feats/270459-ranged-combat-master
I feel like they have added a lot of options since I last made a feat. Let know if it needs anything else.
Yes, it needs more. If you want help, PM me and I can tell you how to make it look just like DDB programmed it for you.
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Thanks for all the help, https://www.dndbeyond.com/feats/271066-ranged-weapon-master.
I updated the name, I like that better, the features within are now Discouraged Approach, Return Fire, and Who’s Next