Seraphim looks cool

thanks

trivilipeice the builder the sentient artifact from limbo

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trivilipeice the builder the sentient artifact from limbo

First off great artifact.

1. I would decrease the int. and add a thing along the lines to "for shaping limbo count there int. as 30"

2. I would add a list of spells for chaotic creations thing

3. for the sentience,  could you add an alignment, I feel its a chaotic neutral or good

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trivilipeice the builder the sentient artifact from limbo

First off great artifact.

1. I would decrease the int. and add a thing along the lines to "for shaping limbo count there int. as 30"

2. I would add a list of spells for chaotic creations thing

3. for the sentience,  could you add an alignment, I feel its a chaotic neutral or good

 1.fair enough 

2.no (might limit to conjuration spells or spells of 3rd level or lower) 

3.sure chaotic neutral would be good

I wanna make Thomas the train a thing, but who would ever use that?

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I wanna make Thomas the train a thing, but who would ever use that?

 a cowboy setting with sentient trains. do it

Made two things that I want feedback on: a bottle of tea, and a spell based on the Inheritance Cycle by Christopher Paolini.

Tea of Rejuvenation

Be Not

be not is accurate to the  inheritance cycle, but anything that insta kills  does not belong in dnd in my opinion.

the tea is cool

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I wanna make Thomas the train a thing, but who would ever use that?

 a cowboy setting with sentient trains. do it

 I wouldn't put it pass some dms

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Made two things that I want feedback on: a bottle of tea, and a spell based on the Inheritance Cycle by Christopher Paolini.

Tea of Rejuvenation

Be Not

 Be Not is a tenth or eleventh level spell - not a 9th.  It's more powerful than casting Power Word Kill an awful number of times.\

Speaking of that, who wants to try making 10th level spells?  

 I'd be down for that. Not that I'd ever use them, but it'd be fun.

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Made two things that I want feedback on: a bottle of tea, and a spell based on the Inheritance Cycle by Christopher Paolini.

Tea of Rejuvenation

Be Not

 Be Not is a tenth or eleventh level spell - not a 9th.  It's more powerful than casting Power Word Kill an awful number of times.\

Speaking of that, who wants to try making 10th level spells?  

 I'd be down for that. Not that I'd ever use them, but it'd be fun.

 I have an idea for a 10th level spell but I have gotten around to homebrewing it. I can share it if you want

Here's a 10th-level spell:

Incarcerate
10th-level abjuration
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: 30 feet
Components: V, S, M (A circle made out of diamond chain links worth at least as many hit points the target has x 20 gp, which is consumed by the spell)
Duration: Concentration, up to 10 minutes
Class: Cleric, Wizard

Choose a creature within range. Golden chains appear, clasping the creature's mouth, arms, legs, and other appendages and begin dragging the creature into the ground. That creature must make a Strength saving throw or become restrained and incapacitated on a failed save. The creature can't speak if it fails the save. If the creature takes damage or a creature uses its action to try to break the targeted creature free, the creature can repeat the saving throw, ending the effect on itself on a success. The condition also ends if the spell ends before 10 minutes have passed. If the spell ends before then, the creature is freed from the binds and the spell has no effect on it. If the spell completes itself after 10 minutes, the creature is dragged into the ground and reappears in an isolated area of Carceri, and the effect of the spell remains on the creature, which is still held by indestructible magical chains, unless removed by means of a wish spell or until a condition you designate has been met. The creature can't be found by any means except replicating the scrying spell by means of a wish. A creature that has seen the targeted creature in this way can find the creature on Carceri, but no other creatures can.

Hay, that's what happened to me ;)

(see location)

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Hay, that's what happened to me ;)

(see location)

lol

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Hay, that's what happened to me ;)

(see location)

lol

 You can do some funny things with the location thing. As for spells, why not just cast imprisonment?

Here's another 10th level spell: 

Hellfire Unleashed
10th-level abjuration
Casting Time: 1 minute
Range: Self (1 mile)
Components: V, S, M (a ruby from the Nine Hells worth at least 50,000 gp, which is consumed by the spell)
Duration: 1 hour
Class: Sorcerer, Wizard, Warlock

You unleash a maelstrom of scorching flames in a 1 mile radius sphere centered on yourself. Each creature and object within that area (including you) takes 18d8 fire damage, which ignores resistance and immunity. If a creature starts its turn within the spell's area during the duration, or enters the area for the first time on its turn, it takes 9d8 fire damage, which ignores resistance. Objects within the area take this damage at the end of each round. 

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Here's another 10th level spell: 

Hellfire Unleashed
10th-level abjuration
Casting Time: 1 minute
Range: Self (1 mile)
Components: V, S, M (a ruby from the Nine Hells worth at least 50,000 gp, which is consumed by the spell)
Duration: 1 hour
Class: Sorcerer, Wizard, Warlock

You unleash a maelstrom of scorching flames in a 1 mile radius sphere centered on yourself. Each creature and object within that area (including you) takes 14d8 fire damage, which ignores resistance and immunity. If a creature starts its turn within the spell's area during the duration, or enters the area for the first time on its turn, it takes 7d8 fire damage, which ignores resistance. Objects within the area take this damage at the end of each round. 

It's kind of underwhelming. Meteor Swarm does an average of 140 damage over a large enough area and doesn't hurt you unless you're trying to kill yourself, when Hellfire Unleashed does an initial average of 63 and 31.5 over later turns, reaching 126 over three rounds. Even with bypassing resistance and not having a save, it should be more impressive.

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Here's another 10th level spell: 

Hellfire Unleashed
10th-level abjuration
Casting Time: 1 minute
Range: Self (1 mile)
Components: V, S, M (a ruby from the Nine Hells worth at least 50,000 gp, which is consumed by the spell)
Duration: 1 hour
Class: Sorcerer, Wizard, Warlock

You unleash a maelstrom of scorching flames in a 1 mile radius sphere centered on yourself. Each creature and object within that area (including you) takes 14d8 fire damage, which ignores resistance and immunity. If a creature starts its turn within the spell's area during the duration, or enters the area for the first time on its turn, it takes 7d8 fire damage, which ignores resistance. Objects within the area take this damage at the end of each round. 

It's kind of underwhelming. Meteor Swarm does an average of 140 damage over a large enough area and doesn't hurt you unless you're trying to kill yourself, when Hellfire Unleashed does an initial average of 63 and 31.5 over later turns, reaching 126 over three rounds. Even with bypassing resistance and not having a save, it should be more impressive.

 The point isn't to deal a good bit of damage. It's to destroy cities. A 1 mile radius sphere is a lot, and it essentially kills most NPCs in the first round. The building don't last much longer. You basically change the geography of a 1 mile radius circle. I'll increase the damage, though.

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Here's another 10th level spell: 

Hellfire Unleashed
10th-level abjuration
Casting Time: 1 minute
Range: Self (1 mile)
Components: V, S, M (a ruby from the Nine Hells worth at least 50,000 gp, which is consumed by the spell)
Duration: 1 hour
Class: Sorcerer, Wizard, Warlock

You unleash a maelstrom of scorching flames in a 1 mile radius sphere centered on yourself. Each creature and object within that area (including you) takes 14d8 fire damage, which ignores resistance and immunity. If a creature starts its turn within the spell's area during the duration, or enters the area for the first time on its turn, it takes 7d8 fire damage, which ignores resistance. Objects within the area take this damage at the end of each round. 

It's kind of underwhelming. Meteor Swarm does an average of 140 damage over a large enough area and doesn't hurt you unless you're trying to kill yourself, when Hellfire Unleashed does an initial average of 63 and 31.5 over later turns, reaching 126 over three rounds. Even with bypassing resistance and not having a save, it should be more impressive.

 The point isn't to deal a good bit of damage. It's to destroy cities. A 1 mile radius sphere is a lot, and it essentially kills most NPCs in the first round. The building don't last much longer. You basically change the geography of a 1 mile radius circle. I'll increase the damage, though.

I get that, but something like a champion will last four rounds in the original version.