I want to give one of my players a sword that has on both sides some script, one in draconic, the other in celestial.
I would want it to say "i serve justice with retribution" But im not sure if that is correct english. Does that sentence make sense to native english speakers?
The Definition of Justice is "just behaviour or treatment." and retribution is "punishment inflicted on someone as vengeance for a wrong or criminal act."
So by having it say "I Serve Justice with Retirbution" it sounds like a Batman style vigilante or a Judge Dredd style law enforcer.
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Thats kinda what im going for. The whole idea is for a paladin that broke his oath and went on a more destructive path but later turns around ever so slightly. Basically an oathbreaker paladin that later switches to a Path of Redemption paladin.
I want to give one of my players a sword that has on both sides some script, one in draconic, the other in celestial.
I would want it to say "i serve justice with retribution" But im not sure if that is correct english. Does that sentence make sense to native english speakers?
It sounds a little bit epic, which I think is appropriate for script written on a sword. I would leave it like it is.
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"Not all those who wander are lost"
Morning/afternoon/evening...
sounds ok ot me but if we go a bit deeper...
The Definition of Justice is "just behaviour or treatment." and retribution is "punishment inflicted on someone as vengeance for a wrong or criminal act."
So by having it say "I Serve Justice with Retirbution" it sounds like a Batman style vigilante or a Judge Dredd style law enforcer.
I would say it as ...
Retribution in the service of Justice
But what happens if the PC uses the weapon in a murder hobo fashion? Is the weapon sentient?
Cum catapultae proscriptae erunt tum soli proscript catapultas habebunt
This is a weapon similar to a holy avenger that will be given to a holy paladin. The weapon itself will be called "Retribution"
Thats kinda what im going for. The whole idea is for a paladin that broke his oath and went on a more destructive path but later turns around ever so slightly. Basically an oathbreaker paladin that later switches to a Path of Redemption paladin.
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