I made a APC and want to know if it's the right Challenge rating
Definitely a complex monster. Before I go on, just know these things: that temporary hit points don’t stack, that the “secondary gun” is better worded as a multiattack, and that it isn’t usually possible for a creature to have double proficiency in an attack.
I made a APC and want to know if it's the right Challenge rating
Definitely a complex monster. Before I go on, just know these things: that temporary hit points don’t stack, that the “secondary gun” is better worded as a multiattack, and that it isn’t usually possible for a creature to have double proficiency in an attack.
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I think the Secondary gun should be renamed to explain what type of gun it is. Otherwise, it's very thematic!
The secondary gun shoots weakened magic missiles so I’m not sure what it should be called. Missiles swarm launcher? Arcane LMG?
Does teleport link take an action or is it automatic,does it spawn soldiers or what,when to the creatures act,are they under it's control,where are they summoned to when not summoned inside the APC.other then that this is great.
A race I made for a homebrew setting,This is version two.Might add more subraces later.
The focus is on the subraces with this race,it's also a bit contrary to alot of modern race design,so it's a bit of a testing ground.
They seem a bit on powerful side but nothing I can see the breaks the game. Lore wise it's a cool concept and done well.
Your body is always partialy decaying,you gain resistance to necrotic damage.In addition,you can will yourself to reverse this powerful decay.As an action,you can expend any number of hit die and roll them.you gain temporary hit points equal to the total,and you do have necrotic resistance whilst you have these hit points.
I'm not sure what your trying to say here. Do you lose your necrotic resistance when you have the hit points gained?
Does the accursed crit stack with the champion sub class?
V3 I think teleport link costing an action is fair for CR. I'm not going to decide what it summons as that's for the DM. It doesn't control what it summons
I like the idea but it's a bit powerful.... Both bullet points are powerful enough that they could have a feat by themselves, with a few other minor abilities.
I feel like it's a bit too powerful to be level 2, but a bit too weak to be level 3 though, so maybe either give it a small buff and make it 3rd level or make it a bit weaker and keep it 2nd.
V3 I think teleport link costing an action is fair for CR. I'm not going to decide what it summons as that's for the DM. It doesn't control what it summons
It's very cool! The formatting it a bit off from official monsters, mind if I reformat it a bit?
Seems pretty good for a singular ability feat. Barbarian shouldn’t be a prerequisite though, fears are supposed to be available to multiple classes, such as the Eldritch Adept feat being available to every caster class.
I mean, you do have to have 19 strength or higher, so it's probably a higher level feat... Or maybe restricted it to only while raging?
Barbarian shouldn’t be a prerequisite though, fears are supposed to be available to multiple classes, such as the Eldritch Adept feat being available to every caster class.
I've been working on creating class-specific feats. I think it could be a cool concept....
Both of these are pretty nice,and boost otherwise mostly pointless features.
Though for song of recovery,I must point out that it makes it very easy to get catnap from a short rest(no warlock dip required).Which is midly broken.
I mean yeah,but please don't bog the thread down with a giant info dump.So make a summary and link to a related source,I'd love to see what you made,i'm a bit of an avid worldbuilder (looks at list of homebrew dnd settings I helped make,damm that's a lot.)
I mean yeah,but please don't bog the thread down with a giant info dump.So make a summary and link to a related source,I'd love to see what you made,i'm a bit of an avid worldbuilder (looks at list of homebrew dnd settings I helped make,damm that's a lot.)
I mean small settings
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The secondary gun shoots weakened magic missiles so I’m not sure what it should be called. Missiles swarm launcher? Arcane LMG?
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Does teleport link take an action or is it automatic,does it spawn soldiers or what,when to the creatures act,are they under it's control,where are they summoned to when not summoned inside the APC.other then that this is great.
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They seem a bit on powerful side but nothing I can see the breaks the game. Lore wise it's a cool concept and done well.
Your body is always partialy decaying,you gain resistance to necrotic damage.In addition,you can will yourself to reverse this powerful decay.As an action,you can expend any number of hit die and roll them.you gain temporary hit points equal to the total,and you do have necrotic resistance whilst you have these hit points.
I'm not sure what your trying to say here. Do you lose your necrotic resistance when you have the hit points gained?
Does the accursed crit stack with the champion sub class?
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V3 I think teleport link costing an action is fair for CR. I'm not going to decide what it summons as that's for the DM. It doesn't control what it summons
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Would relegating slashing resistance to 3rd level be balanced?
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The dagger is cool,though the name is on the nose
Cacophony is a very nice,will most likely use in a game at some point.
The new bow expert is pretty cool.
The savage steel is glaive is very thematic,if a tad bland.
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Unparalleled Strength feat for barbarians.
I like the idea but it's a bit powerful.... Both bullet points are powerful enough that they could have a feat by themselves, with a few other minor abilities.
I agree with stuffattackknightofrandom, it's cool but the name could use improvement.
very, very cool!
I feel like it's a bit too powerful to be level 2, but a bit too weak to be level 3 though, so maybe either give it a small buff and make it 3rd level or make it a bit weaker and keep it 2nd.
See above.
It works but it a tad bland, IMO. Maybe give it some ability that tells you where creatures within a given range are? That would be awesome.
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It's very cool! The formatting it a bit off from official monsters, mind if I reformat it a bit?
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Seems pretty good for a singular ability feat. Barbarian shouldn’t be a prerequisite though, fears are supposed to be available to multiple classes, such as the Eldritch Adept feat being available to every caster class.
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I mean, you do have to have 19 strength or higher, so it's probably a higher level feat... Or maybe restricted it to only while raging?
I've been working on creating class-specific feats. I think it could be a cool concept....
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I made two bard feats!
Song of Recovery
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Both of these are pretty nice,and boost otherwise mostly pointless features.
Though for song of recovery,I must point out that it makes it very easy to get catnap from a short rest(no warlock dip required).Which is midly broken.
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Are homebrew settings allowed?
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I mean yeah,but please don't bog the thread down with a giant info dump.So make a summary and link to a related source,I'd love to see what you made,i'm a bit of an avid worldbuilder (looks at list of homebrew dnd settings I helped make,damm that's a lot.)
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I mean small settings
Isle of the Blood Dragon
Home to a Vampiric Red Dragon who has been starved into madness, surrounded by running water, and with the dragon wingless, the local kingdom uses it to execute people.
Hi everyone! I'm working up the will to finalize my signature, so... I guess this will be the signature for now