Hi, I've been making homebrew for a little while now and I've never posted in this forum asking for feedback before. I figured I would make a master list of all my homebrews and ask for general balance and writing feedback. Don't feel like you have to respond to EVERYTHING. Just whatever strikes your fancy.
This druid gets different spells depending on their watery biome. Currently nonfunctional due to using spells from non-core DnD books. Making your own homebrew feat should allow you to use this class. https://www.dndbeyond.com/subclasses/1281015-circle-of-the-water
I forgot what this artifact even is. Or did I? Wait how did I know it's an artifact? What were we talking about? Don't lose your life trying to figure out what this item is. https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/5617277-item
Hi, I've been making homebrew for a little while now and I've never posted in this forum asking for feedback before. I figured I would make a master list of all my homebrews and ask for general balance and writing feedback. Don't feel like you have to respond to EVERYTHING. Just whatever strikes your fancy.
Subclasses
Travel Domain Cleric
This cleric gets many movement abilities and spells dealing with movement. Definitely a magic focused cleric.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/subclasses/873055-travel-domain
Circle of Water Druid
This druid gets different spells depending on their watery biome. Currently nonfunctional due to using spells from non-core DnD books. Making your own homebrew feat should allow you to use this class.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/subclasses/1281015-circle-of-the-water
Spells
Conjure Magical Instrument
This third level spell lets you magically summon an instrument which you gain proficiency in, also magically charm a crowd.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/spells/1637018-conjure-magical-instrument
Feats
Doppelganger Powers
Made with the exact wording of the doppelganger secret from Rime of the Frostmaiden. Tested in game and fully functional.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/feats/923791-doppleganger-powers
Magic Items
Adamantine Underlay
Combine with armor to get +1 to AC and immunity to critical hits.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/2767307-adamantine-underlay
Assassin's Gloves
Grants a d8 to initiative rolls and lets you cast misty step or invisibility once per day.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/2886617-assassins-gloves
Bag of Oddities
Like a bag of tricks but with more interesting and powerful creatures.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/2874142-bag-of-oddities
Chandelier of Fair Dueling
The most insane and complex magic item I have ever made. Usually I try to keep things as simple as possible. I basically made this one as a joke for a very specific situation.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/2361237-chandelier-of-fair-dueling
Coffee Cup of Homeopathy
Drinking this magically filling coffee cup makes you think your diseases are cured when actually they are not.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/5617652-coffee-cup-of-homeopathy
Dagger of the War Mage
The first magic item I ever made. Slash with an acidic dagger after casting a spell.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/2851036-dagger-of-the-war-mage
Divine Shard
Ever heard stories of DnD characters becoming gods? With this you can. No going back though. Based on an AJ Picket video of the same name.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/2840140-divine-shard
Elverquisst
Based on a magic item referenced in Rime of the Frostmaiden. Alcohol that restores health.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/5162605-elverquisst
Faerie Hammer
A hammer that becomes more powerful with time. Non-Functional.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/1786208-faerie-hammer
Figurine of Wondrous Power (Diamond Unicorn)
Allows you to summon a unicorn.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/2328243-figurine-of-wondrous-power-diamond-unicorn
Flawed Philosopher's Stone
Gives you gold over time.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/2378201-flawed-philosophers-stone
Ghostly Box
An encounter in a box.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/2228354-ghostly-box
Goggles of Light Shielding
Get rid of that pesky sunlight sensitivity with some other minor benefits such as immunity to hypnotic pattern.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/1822166-goggles-of-light-shielding
Item
I forgot what this artifact even is. Or did I? Wait how did I know it's an artifact? What were we talking about? Don't lose your life trying to figure out what this item is.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/5617277-item
CursedLuckstoneAn item from Ghosts of Saltmarsh with spoilers removed.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/2274209-luckstone
Mysterious Puzzle Box
Probably some balancing issues on this one. Requires 19 intelligence and raises all stats by 1.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/2733374-mysterious-puzzle-box
Pearl of Blood
Bestows power over sharks, allowing one to call sharks from 40 miles away and cause people to blood frenzy.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/4966592-pearl-of-blood
Pearl of Clams
Summon clams. Some random chance they will either help you or mess you up.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/1941269-pearl-of-clams
Pipes of Gobblefication
Created for one of my players who had a gazer familiar.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/2885981-pipes-of-gobblefication
Potion of Time Travel
Use very wisely. Made because I noticed a lack of artifact potions.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/1899260-potion-of-time-travel
Ring of Lava Breathing
Grants immunity to fire and ability to swim in lava.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/1903069-ring-of-lava-breathing
Ring of Light
A legendary ring that grants angelic abilities.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/2895656-ring-of-light
Scroll of Frogs
Summon some bullywugs who serve you, then this scroll disappears.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/4979356-scroll-of-frogs
Staff of Storms
A staff that grants some stormy spells and lets you create a special storm that does some spirit guardians like lightning damage.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/2886045-staff-of-storms
Stormbringer Dagger
Made for one of my players. Pushes people and does some extra damage.
https://www.dndbeyond.com/magic-items/2850673-stormbringer-dagger